Galciv 4 story

The final chapter in the Galciv saga!

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On response to my Galciv 3 post, i have decided to tell my story idea for Galciv 4 and i mean the whole story.When your done reading, you guys tell me what do you think about my idea.
Prolouge:The Story takes place 30 years after the eventsof Galciv 3. With the Galaxy nearly ruined and the major civilizations nearly destroyed,the galaxy has now become a living hell.Survivors of both major and minor civilizations, have formed their own civilizations.These civilizations are more like criminal empires,like the Jagged Knife, The pirates,etc.These civilizations want to take over the galaxy and have it for themselves.But there is a civilization that wants to restore the galaxy,this is the story of the Terran Knights, lead by Alan Bradly's grandson,Johnothan Bradly,this is their journy through the ruins of the galaxy, as they battle their way through the empires as they try to restore the Terran Alliance and the galaxy.How do you guy like it, i'm just getting started,so get ready for chapter 1!
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Reply #2 from GalCiv2 Forums Top
Chapter 1:Rescue
It was a beautiful galactic day, the stars were shining, the planets were round like all ways and two Terran Knights Star Jets were patroling a small sector of the Xelo quadrent.
Star Jet pilot 1:I love every thing about flying through space!
Star Jet pilot 2:Well i don't because i got a feeling the somthing bad is about to happen.
As the Star Jet's were flying somthing grabed them with tractor beams.They were being attacked by ships belonging to none other than space pirates.
Space pirate captin:Excelent now we can bring these ships in and well be able to get in the ships' computers,(laughs insanly).
Pirate officer:Why are we stealing their ship computers?
Space pirate captin:Because Terran Star Jet computer are linked to their main data base, so we can use their computers to hack into the Terran control network, all of their sensors will be disabled and by doing that we can disable their sensors, then we sneak in and attack!
Space pirate officer:Oh.That is an excellent idea!
While pirates chated they had no idea the the pilots were contacting renforcements!
Meanwhile above planet Gorgonopsolips 3, Johnothan Bradely was in his ship known as the Soaring Knight, the Soaring Knight looked just like a Terran survay ship, but with weapons and defenses, etc.
John:Okay guys we just got a message from our patrol ships, they that their under attack by pirates.Now let's go their and kick some pirate asses!
The Soaring Knight goes into hyper dive and arrives at the Xelo quadrent, only to see that the pirate ship has the Space Jets almost in their hangers.
Terran officer:Sir what should we do?
John:Fire the sniper missles at that pirate ship,this should be easy because their ship has no defenses,now fire!
The Soaring Knight launch three cylinder shaped missles at the pirate ship.
The pirate ship explodes into large hunks of metal.
The Space Jet pilots send a message to the Soaring Knight.
Space Jet pilot:Thanks for the rescue
John:No problem!Now let's get out of here!
The three ships go into hyper space.
That's all for chapter 1, chapter 2 coming soon.Tell me what you think!
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Reply #3 from GalCiv2 Forums Top
I will now give out a complement and a suggestion.

First, the complement. (And some minor mitpicking):

Cool story, but try to hit Enter when someone new is speaking.

Second, the suggestion:

This would make a great custom campaign, which makes TA's release date seem that much farther off. :p 
Reply #4 from GalCiv2 Forums Top
I will now give out a complement and a suggestion.

First, the complement. (And some minor mitpicking):

Cool story, but try to hit Enter when someone new is speaking.

Second, the suggestion:

This would make a great custom campaign, which makes TA's release date seem that much farther off.  


This will be a custom campaign and the Sniper missile launcher will be one of my custom componets created with componet editor.
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Chapter 2:Return to Earth(part 1:The Plan)
On the Soaring Knight, a large meeting was taking place.The meeting includes some of the best ground soldiers the Terran Knights have ever had.
John:If i can have everyones attention please?
The soldiers looked at John.
John:Hi, today i want to discuss a plan, this plan is very importent so pay attention!
A large hologram of the solar system appears.
John:For the past 30 years our plantet Earth has belonged to the pirates ever scince the galaxy was ruined in the Great Dark Aplopcolypse War(NOTE from the author:Dark Apocolypse is the name of a mission in the Dark Avatar campaign).
John:Now it's time to take it back!I have ordered a transport to bring us back to the planet, we'll use stealth shields to sneak past orbiting ships.
The hologram changes to a map of the Earth's surface.
John:We'll have to land somewhere in the area of the United States.The pirates have a base in the ruins of Washington D.C.
The map zooms in to the location were New England once was.
John:We'll have to land were New Hampshire once was.Now for those who don't know, New Hampshire is were the location of a research lab somewhere in the mountains to the north.This is were the Terran Alliance was once developing weapons that would be used to freeze incoming enemy ships,during the DAW the weapons were to be launched at Drengin Troop Transports.But the weapons gps system malfunctioned and acidently hit Manchester, thus throwing it into a never ending winter, small houses were burried leaving only large appartment and offices were half burried.Making it like antarctica.Now we must get dropped of there so we can make our way to DC and take back the Earth.Who's with me?
Soldiers:We are!
Onboard the transport John preparing himself.
Inside the transport was several tanks and 2 troop carrying vehicles.
John get's on top of one and oders the troops to look him.
John:For the Terran Knights!
Soldiers:For the Terran Knights!

That's all for part 1 of chapter 2.Part 2 coming soon!
Reply #6 from GalCiv2 Forums Top
Your concept and the name Terran Knights reminds me of some elements from Andromeda. But then again, anything can remind someone of something else. For example, my AAR was written in a style heavily reminiscent of Tom Clancy (probably because I've read like ten of his books).

Basically I'm trying to say that I'm not attempting to make any claims against your creative honesty. Work on your organization (qoutation marks would be a welcome improvement) and keep up the good work :)
Reply #7 from GalCiv2 Forums Top
Chapter 2:Return to Earth(part 2:Ground Subzero)
On Earth the transport had landed in Manchester NH.The transport's cargo bay unloaded it's cargo and one of the troop transporting vehicles, John was arming himself with an A27-TAW assualt rifle.
The vehicle doors open and the troops including John get out.
John:Boys welcome to Ground Subzero.Now we'll need to get across the city and on to the highway.Acording to my gps location i say that were on top of the ruins of the Verision Arena.Quickly get the tanks into hover mode!
The tanks and transports begin to hover.
John and his crew get into one of the tanks.The tanks head for the highway then all of a sudden the tanks come under attack by mobile defense cannons that were built to protect the armory located in the city.
John:We'll take care of the cannons, you guys get out of here!
The tanks split up with John's tank.
John:fire!
The tank fires it's weapons at the defense cannons,The cannons blow up.John's tank regroups with the others, then they get on the highway and head to D.C.

That's all for Chapter 2 part 2,part 3 coming soon!
Reply #8 from GalCiv2 Forums Top
you need to make it more readable. spaces
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Chapter 2:Return to Earth (Part 3:DC)
The scene begins with the pirates and Terran Knights in a feirce battle.John and the pirate leader chasing eachother through the streets as the battle unfolds.The chase ends at a museum.The pirate leader heads inside. John follows him. But he quickly loses him. John now finds himself in a "History's Worst Monsters" exibit. In front of John was a Big Daddy suit from Bioshock, a T-rex skeleton and a Storm Trooper maniquin.
John: Damn these are some ugly monster.
Space pirate leader: Not as ugly as you!
John turned his head around and sees the pirate leader with a knife in his left hand. John pulls out his plasma rifle and points it at the pirate leader's.
John:Don't think about it!
Space pirate leader: I do any thing but please don't kill me?
John: First I want all of the planets you own, second I want all of your Star ship designs and third want all of your techs.Deal?
Space pirate leader: Deal.

And so Earth was now back in the hand of the Terrans.
That's all for now!
Reply #10 from GalCiv2 Forums Top
1. SPACES!!!!!!

2. Wouldn't "Monsters: Scourge of History and Fiction" be more appropriate?

Reply #11 from GalCiv2 Forums Top
1. SPACES!!!!!!

2. Wouldn't "Monsters: Scourge of History and Fiction" be more appropriate?



Sorry.
Reply #12 from GalCiv2 Forums Top
"Sorry."

I appologize for getting in your grille like that, and please continue with the story.
Reply #13 from GalCiv2 Forums Top
Chapter 3:An unexpected call.
On the Soaring Knight, one of the bridge's radar officers had caught his eyes on something, it was a planet.
Radar officer: Sir you better check this out.
John:It's a planet and it has an abanndoned colony on it.Quickly pull out the star map to see what planet it is.
A large map of the quadrent appears along with the planet and it's name.
John:It can't be, that planet is Dithlr! Prepare to land!
Radar officer: What for?
John: Because that's were the Korath Clan used to have weapons labs!We need to explore the old labs to destroy any old research projects!
Just then the ships viewscreen turns on and there was Hitheous, emperor of the Thalan Empire.
John: Hello Hitheous, what is it?
Hitheous: We asssssssk a favor of you.
John:Tell me.
Hitheous: We need you to retreve usssssss a device from one of the labssssss on Dithlr?
John:Why can't your people do it themselves?
Hitheous:Because the lab isssssssss heavily defended by advance sssssecurity and our people our are not good fightersssssss, bessssidessss after what we heard about what you did on Earth you musssst be great fightersssss.
John:We'll do it, but in return you must give us 250,000 BC.
Hitheous:Excellent, we'll have a collecter sssship arrive assss ssssssoon asssss you clear the ssssurface of any hosssssstilessss.
The Soaring Knight heads towrds Dithlr.
Chapter 4 coming soon!
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Chapter 4: Dithlr
On board the Soaring Knight, John and his crew were discussing their arrival.
John: I think i need to do this by my self, if i need help I'll contact you.I guess i will have to take an escape pod to land on the surface.
John gets in the pod and types in the location of where to land.The escape pod lands in some abandoned city.John quickly gets out and sees a large statue of the Korath Clan logo.John looks around for any searches for any hostiles.After see none he takes out his mobile communication device and quickly gets in contact with Hitheous.
John:Your collector ship can land now.I'll take care of that lab.
John plants a bomb on the statue and thus causes the statue to blow revealing an entrance to the lab.Upon entering the lab John makes his way to an area where the device is located.The device appears to be shaped like a red diamond with two edges.John turns on his communication device.
John:I got the device.
Hitheous:Excellent, we'll have a collector drone pick it up.
Behind John was a hover drone with a carrying case in it's hands.John puts the device into the case and the drone hovers away.
John:And by the way i thought you said the lab was heavily guarded.
Just then an alarm sound goes off.
John:What's going on?
Hitheous begins to laugh manically.
Just then the image of Hitheous changes into a creature with three eyes, long tentacle like fingers, with tentacles sticking out of the back of it's head.
Hitheous:Let me tell you this, there was no Thalan Empire and we just fooled you into giving us a device made for powering a deadly weapon.Greetings i am Hitheous of the Dexilian Empire.Now die!
Just then several defense drones break into the room.John quickly breaks open a vent that leads to an abandoned weapons factory.Now inside the vent John crawls through the vents.Who knows what will happen to him.

That's all for chapter 4, Chapter 5 coming soon!
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Chapter 5:The legend of the Arnorian Blade of light
Deep within the vents John had found a vent that leads to an abandoned landing pad and on it was a ship that looked like a Thalan transport that was all black.
John:Crap!
The transport takes off.
John sees a TK landing pod arrive.
John:Oh great, i'm saved.
The pod opens and John heads inside and the pod flys into space.
Later on board the Soaring Knight, John soon learns that the Dexilians have nearly taken over the galaxy.
John:What about our allies?
Officer:They too will suffer like the galaxy.
John:Is their a way we can stop them.
Officer:Well there is the legendary Arnorian Blade of Light.
John:The what?
Officer:The Arnorian Blade of Light,you know the one from the legend.
John:Never heard of the legend.
Officer:The story goes like this.Before the war between the Arnor and Dread Lords,the Arnor created 5 giant mechanical beings called "The Galactic Gaurdians" whose purpose was to maintain peace, the five included Galar the Knight of life whose blade and shield represents the the power all of the life in the galaxy, Shiler the Warrior of justice whose armor represented the strength of justice and order in the galaxy and also made her hard to defeat in combat, Arhcees the archer who represented the balance of intellegence by fire directly at a target and bullseye it by acuretly calculating the distance, Caloria the jouster whose ability to time travel and fast speeds represented time.
John:What about the fifth?
Officer:The fith was like the evil step-child of the family and was call Dreadlar was a pure evil,hate filled, squid shaped deamon and was so evil that the Arnor had locked it away in the same pocket universe that the Dread Lords were put in.
John:If he was so evil, why did they create him?
Officer:He was an accident created by an atempt to create a fifth gaurdian.
John:Oh.
Officer:When the Dread Lords arrived in that pocket universe they found Dreadlar so when they broke out the took him with them.Durng the war, the Galactic Guardians and Dreadlar had fought an epic battle that ended with the Guardians and Dreadlar.But the reamins of the guardians together formed the Arnorian blade of Light.It's said that the remains of Dreadlar was hidden somewere in a planet surrounded by a asteroid field, the Arnor placed the spirit of Dreadlar in a device that was hidden on what is now Dithlr and the Arnorian Blade of light was placed in a temple on an unkown planet.
John:We need to find that blade!
Officer:It's been lost for centuaries!No one knows were it is!
John:Damn it!
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Chapter 6: Acsension
Seth's note: Sorry ittook so long!
John grew impatient.
The Soaring Knight's radar picked up somthing nearby.
John: What the? Quickly someone send in a scout ship!
So a scout ship was seent to investigate only to bring back good news.
Scout ship pilot: I saw what appered to be a giant crystal!
John: It's an acsension crystal! Send in a countstructor.
And so a mining base was built around the crystal.
There was a small hole that a drop pod can fit into.
Inside was a huge caveren with a small statue the size of a lamp with a crystal that looked like a round.
John pushed it and a huge hologram of the galaxy filled the entire room.
A voice began to speak in an unkown language.
Voice: Safid kornu ecall louse andal kenwesheda kono daiu.
The message ended there.
John grabs the statue and leaves.
Back on the Soaring Knight.
John: Take this to the lab for translation.
Officer: yes sir!