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[quote who="Orodum" reply="12" id="2079378"]instead of having 2 grunts, why not have minor gurnt and major grunt? (Or take the ranks from Halo, in order of difficulty to kill - minor grunt [Ungoy], major grunt, jackals[Kig-yar], Drones [Yanme'e], minor elite [Sangheili], majore elite, zealot, SpecOps elite, Lekgolo, and San 'Shyuum) [/quote] the two grunts pretty much mean that instead of the two different rankings the U.S. have, i just made them one rank for tha
i dont really want to quote you, AxeEmAll, just cause thats a whole lotta word, but here we go. the vasari, in my perspective, dont care about the races they dominate, as you said, nor do they care whether a high official is killed. but they do care about politics, somewhat. like what u'll see in my next chapter, the High Captain assassinates the Fleet Admiral Commander because he wanted to rule the fleet, and he thought that Xranks was in the way. Now when the other officials of the
thank u israil. i made some changes, but i really like the grunt idea for Vasari. how do u like the changes to the fleet master issue? a premiers basically the best of the type. pretty much. like the premier of france.
i like the idea of the buildings being cut off from supplies, and from that maybe the people running the buildings starve, and the buildings "die off" from lack of supplies. pretty realistic. if a base is being cut off from supplies, its going to be considerably weakened, and if the "blockade" lasted long enough, the base would be so weakened it would be easier to just kill yourselves and end it. rather a dark thought once i look back on it...but these are presumably a highly trained military
[quote who="Orodum" reply="8" id="2077098"]maybe making the ranks a different language, eh? at least for Vasari. In the game manual, there was mention of a rank in their language. (and "petty warrior" is above "head bombardier"?) [/quote] thank you, Orodum. The manual doesnt actually name a specific Vasari rank, they just name the Dark Fleet. Dark Fleet Veerr. and well, petty warrior of the remnants is a hefty impressive name, but yeah, i see your point. p
ha thanks, but i cant ask them to let me publish it. at least not till iv got it almost completely done. WHICH I CANT DO IF NO ONE OFFERS SUGGESTIONS ON THE RANKING CHART! (thats a hint to talk about it) maybe they'll skim over it while checking on the forums one day and like it, but right now im just gonna concentrate on making the story awesome. refining it. then maybe ill ask around about publishing. tho thatll be a year later at the least, they time it takes to write a real
im actually got all this in jarte. but i cant publish without permission from the ironclad guys that would be illegal big no-no
hey guys! if ur not looking at the first title page think marked READ! READ! DONT SKIP!, i would advise you to do that. i post special updates to the story, there, and any other revelant information there. like the link to the galaxyforge file of Vorg's flight from the Vasari Empire. u gotta always giv that first thing a quick glance, to make sure ur not missing out on anything.
woops i posted that list twice, betr delete it on this one and fill it with random dribble so itll let me keep the changes. so let me recap. ANY ideas u hav for a change in these rankings, let me no. but if u wanna lean towards thinking up better ones for the Vasari and the chief warrant officers of the TEC, i wouldnt mind. those were the ones i was least happy about. o, and scroll to the right on the list to get to the vasari names. the scroll bars on the bottom.
well iv been working out a chart for the military ranks, once i start going into space in my story. This is close to being the finished product, and as such I would love suggestions on any of these ranks that just do not rub right with you. Any comments at all. the boxes that have no name mean theres no rank of that kind in that race. just to clear that up. <
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[quote who="Cptn_Miller" reply="13" id="2062803"]Maybe the Giterna will help thier fellow human ancestors, the TEC !!!! [/quote] nope sorry, the Giterna formed because they didn't like how the Advent was preparing to kill the TEC. They still want to kill them, they just wanna do it their way. so no Advent+TEC team, sry [e digicons]^_^[/e] [quote who="Cptn_Miller" reply="11" id="2058237"]That is some great stuff guy !!! Sounds like you could make a book out of all th
iv only done multiplayer a couple of times, but in some of the games iv been in a guys been kicked, and then he keeps on comin back again and again and its just a really annoying waste of time. i like the banned for a certain amount of time idea. up goes karma.
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YES I HAV IT! thanks a lot annatar and evryone else [e digicons]:w00t:[/e]
wait just kidding i hav .NET 3.5 installed, but my computer still doesnt recognize the .rar file. and it counts it as a file, not a folder. ....i could use suggestions
ha kitkun and annatar, nevr thought of that im really stupid [e digicons]:drool:[/e]
i currently hav the NET. framwork 1.0 how am i supposed to upgrade it? or do i have to buy something else? ha sry im putting this on here but i didnt want to open a new forum thing for wats being asked here
well, how can i say no to that? i guess i can find the time to start all over again. expect a new one by next week and theres a thumbs up button next to the report button, thats for karma i think [e digicons]:grin:[/e]
i mead i could probably go through this and copy down what iv already wrote and start again on the new stuff, but this place is a wasteland ur like the third person to comment on this im just not motivated to go to all that trouble...
ah theres a problem...there was something messed up with my computer and all the stuff i had on this story disappeared so now we'll never know the ending...
u need Macromedia Flash v9.0.28 or greater i dont hav it either...apparently
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