Poor grammar is a distraction

Take time on the seemingly inocuous details

Whoever is responsible for editing/approving the text needs to be double-checked.

I saw "SHAPE MARS' FATE" but should be "SHAPE MARS'S FATE"

I saw "We know you are anxious to get the give-away..." but should be "We know you are eager to get the give-away..."

I saw "...jet fuel is quite flammable." but should be "...jet fuel is quite inflammable."

Just to name a few.

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