Summer Night Sea

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Summer Night Sky

Hi,

i'm want publish a preview: Summer Night Sea

This is a my Wallapaper, please rate and comment.... write a advice :-)


Good holiday to all .....

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Reply #1 Top

I'm not a Gallery Mod, and this is written as a plain viewer -

1. The lighting on the crescent moon and clouds on the left is opposite... should be from one direction unless explained in the work itself.

2. Don't understand the pale, circular light area in the center and its perspective.

3. The body of water has waves but they don't seem to change the reflection of the moon.

4. There seems to be a light source (dawn?) at the center of the horizon... if so, shouldn't the foreground be darker and lightening towards the horizon and shouldn't that lighting be reflected in the illumination of the crescent moon and clouds?

5. Like the colors a good deal.

Reply #2 Top

Dang Doc, well said! Were you an art critic in a past life? 

Reply #3 Top

The preview image posted at the link is really too tiny to access what the image looks like. Previews are supposed to be at least 1024 x 768. >_>

Reply #4 Top

Quoting Frankief, reply 3
The preview image posted at the link is really too tiny to access what the image looks like. Previews are supposed to be at least 1024 x 768

yep

Reply #5 Top

Thank you for all advice, i'm is a starter artist :-) 

the real res is 1400 x 900

Now publish a preview 1024 x 640 (Proportion)


Reply #6 Top

looks good ..... would look even better if it was a Dream :zzz: XD

 

Reply #7 Top

More advice...lose the signature/text at the bottom. IMO ,most wallpapers look better without it.

Reply #9 Top

Quoting Wizard1956, reply 7
More advice...lose the signature/text at the bottom. IMO ,most wallpapers look better without it.

I'll either refuse to use wallpapers with text/signatures on them based on principle, or just simply remove them (PS ftw). :ninja:

Reply #10 Top

Quoting DrJBHL, reply 1
1. The lighting on the crescent moon and clouds on the left is opposite... should be from one direction unless explained in the work itself.

2. Don't understand the pale, circular light area in the center and its perspective.

3. The body of water has waves but they don't seem to change the reflection of the moon.

4. There seems to be a light source (dawn?) at the center of the horizon... if so, shouldn't the foreground be darker and lightening towards the horizon and shouldn't that lighting be reflected in the illumination of the crescent moon and clouds?

5. Like the colors a good deal.

I was typing away until I read back through the thread and realized "what doc said".... :-"

Reply #11 Top

Lighting is wrong.

Reflections are wrong.

Perspective is wrong.

'object' placement [cloud on one corner and moon on the other] is at best 'contrived'.

Prominent Tag is undesirable on a wall.

Landscape 'realism' is thus totally lacking....;)

 

Reply #12 Top

Keep at it Kenny... no one killed you.. yet.

Don't get discouraged.. practice practice practice and take criticism constructively, even tho at times it may seem harsh. :sun:

Reply #14 Top

Then listen to the experts Kenny 1983. There are many fine wall makers here. They'' help get you where you want to be.

Reply #15 Top

Quoting Uvah, reply 14
Then listen to the experts Kenny 1983. There are many fine wall makers here. They'' help get you where you want to be.

thought you were bout' to mention my name ..... :rofl:

Reply #16 Top

Quoting Uvah, reply 14
Then listen to the experts Kenny 1983. There are many fine wall makers here. They'' help get you where you want to be.

 

Very Thank to all guy ...... i'm want learn more from the wallpaper and photo manipolation artist

Reply #17 Top

We hope to see great things from you, Kenny.