Redemption, Resurrection, Retribution

The Final Part...

This is the final book of the Jordan Locke series. Part 1 was Altaria's Last Stand, and Part 2 was Jordan's Revenge. Please read them now before start this if you haven't already. If you have, sti back and enjoy the read. Because I have the story more planned out, I should be able to write it faster.

Chapter 1

Through the reaches of space near the remnants of the Terran Alliance, the battleships Independence and Royal Vengeance continued on their journey. Aboard the bridge of the Independence, the ship that led the way through the warp tunnel, a handful of men were at their stations, keeping the ship running. In the captain’s chair sat Jordan Locke.

Three f^cking months, thought Jordan. It’s been that long already? Jesus Christ… A check of the calendar proved the date correct. Jordan leaned back in his chair and recounted what had happened since mercenaries hired by Tresia Kolonus, the leader of an Altarian elitist movement called Uslynthinis, sent mercenaries to board the Independence to destroy the ship and capture his allies, the renegade Yor Ordo, and Aelytha, an Altarian refugee that had fallen in love with Jordan. It had been three months since those events had happened, and to add insult to injury, Tresia had manipulated the Altarian government to place a bounty on Jordan and his men. All of this because Jordan killed at most six people, all of them twisted and cruel. Three months had gone by with no change on his status. The bounty was there, the many serious charges stayed the same, and the bounty remained at fifteen million standard credits. Jordan had doubted that his name would ever be cleared by authorities. With everything dedicated to the war effort, domestic things tended to be neglected. History taught that.

The two ships came out of warp at a star system in order to make any needed turns and let the warp engines recharge. The men at the control stations got up and stretched, as did Jordan. Owen Derekson, a man whom Jordan had hired to work with him, approached. “Jordan, we’re at the system. Now what do we do?”

Jordan leaned back in his chair. “We’ve never really had anything to do, Owen. We can just spend some time here and see if the bounty’s been removed, but I doubt it will.”

“Knowing Tresia and her influence, there is no way that bounty is coming off,” said Owen.

“I know, I know. One can still hope, though. I would try to go into the Terran Alliance myself and try to clear my name, but it wouldn’t work. I’d be put in handcuffs five minutes after docking. Our ships are probably tagged. Two Vortex-class battleships would easily be seen.”

“Jordan, you can still try my idea of contacting Altos for help. I’ve said it many times. I’m not trying to sound rude, but you need to-”

 “Owen, if you think I’m closed to other people’s ideas, I’m not. Trust me. I may have used to be, but that was ages ago. I would do it, but people would detect our transmission, and get pretty suspicious. We could go to the Terran Alliance, but like I said, we’d be seen. Talking to Altos is an excellent idea, but we’d be found. There’s no one out here but us.”

Owen checked a display that showed system scans. “Actually, we’re not alone. A group of ships is coming in. Looks like an exploration task force.”

Jordan got up and looked at the display. “Why the hell would the Terran Alliance send ships to a place like this? What’s out here that out scanners didn’t see?”

“They’re not coming from the Terran Alliance systems. They’re coming from somewhere beyond that. The Terran Alliance sent forces out like this before the war. When we started fighting the Drengin, they all returned. Why is this one returning just now?”

“How should I know?” asked Jordan. “Who’s the captain of the task force?”

“Someone by the name and rank of Colonel Jenna Casey. The ships’ ETA is about a half hour.”

“Okay, how did we not see them sooner?” asked Jordan.

“The sun apparently was blocking that area from our sensors,” explained Owen.

“Like holding a coin up to your eye…” said Jordan with an eye roll. “Plot an intercept course.”

 

After a quick trip at sub-light speeds, the Independence and Royal Vengeance arrived in the general area where the ship’s computers calculated the arrival of the Terran task force. A warp tunnel opened, and about ten small ships sped out of it.

Jordan opened his mouth to order the ships to be hailed, but the lead ship of the task force sent a communication request before he could even speak. He opened up a channel and a communication was projected from the ceiling of the bridge. Jordan found himself looking at an attractive young woman, whom he assumed to be Jenna Casey.

Jordan smiled. “You sent a communication request?”

The woman nodded. “Yes. I am Colonel Jenna Casey of Task Force Odyssey. We are en route to Earth on a mission for the Terran government. Who are you, and how are you in control of such military equipment?”

“My name’s Jordan Locke. Until about two years ago, I held the rank of Captain. Since the Earth Shield was put up, I’ve been out of the Navy.”

“Pardon me, Mr. Locke, but what are you talking about? What is the Earth Shield?”

“Colonel Casey, have you or your fleet received or sent any communications during your trip?”

“At the beginning, yes. Something extremely important happened that cut off our communications. What is this Earth Shield?”

Jordan took a long breath. “Colonel Casey, during your absence, a war between the Terran Alliance and the Drengin Empire was fought. We were winning until the Dread Lords, the Precursor civilization, came out of this pocket universe and started launching attacks. The Terran Alliance managed to stop them, however, the Drengin Empire took advantage of this in order to attack on destroy the Terran Alliance, because there was never a ceasefire. Most of the Terran Forces retreated to Earth, where somehow this force field was raised, blocking anything attempting to cross it. I don’t how they did it, some people were talking about some ghost-like being called Draginol giving a plan for a shield generator.”

Casey’s eyes widened. “Draginol?! He was at Earth?”

“Uh, you know him, or it?” asked Owen, a look of puzzlement on his face.

“What I have to tell the Terran Alliance involves him and many other factors. I have to return to Earth. What’s the status of the Dread Lords?”

“Dead, for the most part,” said Jordan. “The rest have gone into hiding. They’ve caused a civil war in the Drengin Empire. We had a nasty encounter with them at this battle over Toria.”

“What I have to tell the government is vital. I must get back to Earth. The information I have could possibly change the known galaxy,” said Casey.

“I see,” said Jordan. If I can somehow get aboard her ship or travel with her fleet, I can get to Earth and talk to Altos to see if he can help me.

“Before I leave, I must ask: why are you out here?”

“The Altarians have placed a warrant against me for killing several people. Evil people. I don’t want to risk going to the Terran Alliance, because it’s likely I’ll get arrested. Where are you headed for?”

“Earth. Twilight Station to be precise.”

“I need to get there. Can I travel with your fleet? I have a shuttle I can use.”

“And why would I allow that? A criminal is a criminal, even if you are a former Navy captain.”

“Because I didn’t do anything against the Terran Alliance,” explained Jordan.

Casey quickly typed something on her console. “This record says that you have conspired with the Drengin Empire and Yor Collective. You are an enemy of the Terran Alliance and Altarian Republic. Explain that.”

“The leader of those people I killed fabricated information about me. Talk to Commodore Altos Carniss or Admiral Evars. They have the real story.”

“What story?”

“They know what really happened. Now, may I please come along with you? I also have to get to Twilight Station.”

“You have a ship. Fly there yourself.”

“The Independence is going to be easily seen approaching the Terran Alliance. We have smaller ships docked, but people won’t get suspicious if we travel with you.”

Casey nodded, her jaw length hair bobbing slightly. “Very well. We leave soon. Get ready.”

“We’ll need an hour at most,” said Jordan.

“An hour it is. No more.” The channel closed.

“Owen, you and I’ll take the Perseus,” said Jordan

“Right,” said Owen. “I’ll need to take off some of its heavier weapons. The station authorities aren’t stupid. If they see a ship armed to the teeth land in a civilian hangar, well, you know what will happen.”

There was no more to say. Owen alerted the hangar crews and sent them instructions on what to remove. The two then left the bridge and headed for the hangar.

 

After a quick ride down a turbolift, the two arrived in one of the Independence’s hangars. Owen’s ship, the Perseus, was surrounded by several hangar workers and mechanics. One of them walked up to Owen. “Sir, we’ve removed the heavy mass drivers and missile launchers. We’ve left the lasers intact, and disguised their signatures, as you ordered.”

“Very good,” replied Owen. “Is the ship ready for departure?”

“Ready as it’ll ever be,” said the technician.

Jordan and Owen walked up the boarding ramp and into the ship. Despite being the size of a corvette-class ship, the Perseus only required two people for a skeleton crew. After running pre-flight checks, Jordan and Owen settled into the pilot’s seats.

The hangar master radioed the Perseus. “Everything’s clear. You’re good to go.”

After waiting for the hangar to depressurize, Owen activated the ship’s engines. Once the hangar doors were fully open, the Perseus lifted off the hangar floor and into space. After about ten minutes of travel, the ship arrived at Jenna Casey’s fleet.

One of the ships radioed the Perseus. “You got here earlier than expected. We’re ready to make the jump to Earth. A word of warning though: if we have the slightest feeling that you’re lying simply to use for cover, we’ll be aboard your ship and have your butts hauled off to jail.”

“How heartwarming,” said Jordan, making an obscene gesture even though the communication was only audio. “We’re ready.”

“Jump on our signal,” said the person on the other end.

A few seconds later, the fleet jumped into warp, heading toward the home of humanity.


 

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Apologies for the delay, I've been a bit busy. The chapters themselves are a lot longer than the ones in Jordan's Revenge, too.

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Chapter 2

Earth, thought Jordan. He felt a tear form in his eye, and quickly wiped it away. It had been close to two years since he had been near the planet, not counting the time when he was trapped outside when the great Earth Shield was activated. It’s so close, yet I still can’t set my feet on my surface. Still, there was much to do before that could happen.

Traveling at sub-light speed, the Perseus and Task Force Odyssey, continued on their approach to Earth. When the blue planet completely dominated the forward windows, Twilight Station appeared. Until the Earth Shield was raised, this was the hub of the Sol System, a true space city.

“I’ve heard stories about this thing,” said Owen. “Just how big is this thing?”

“Owen, this station defies the word big. To be honest, I don’t even think they’ve even invented the word that describes the size of Twilight Station,” laughed Jordan.

The group of ships continued on towards the station. Soon it blocked out the Earth from sight. Jordan knew the history and construction of Twilight Station from his days at the Terran Alliance Naval Academy. Several massive bars many miles long formed a tripod like assembly, which the station was built on. Hundreds of additions and extensions were then attached to this frame. Dozens of passageways for ships to travel through ran throughout the station, which then led to hundreds of docking bays of varying sizes, ranging from hangar bays able to dock small shuttles to large clamps able to hold ships the size of the Independence. At the very center of the station sat several large fusion reactors that powered the station, as well as the restricted “cores” that only top military, diplomatic, and government personnel were generally allowed into.

After looking at the station, Jordan brought up a projection of the station and found a heavily used entrance point, knowing that traveling in a crowd would be make it harder to be seen. “Owen, hail the station,” he said.

Owen activated a radio channel. “Twilight Station, this is the ship Perseus. Requesting permission to dock.”

“Your name and purpose for coming aboard Twilight Station?” said the person on the other end.

“Johan Hopkins. I’m here to conduct a business meeting,” replied Owen.

“One second,” said who was most likely a docking overseer.

Jordan looked at Owen. “I’ve never been asked that before by the station people.”

“Probably because we were in the military. They generally don’t question military personnel,” said Owen.

The radio link resumed. “Okay, Mr. Hopkins, your ship checks out. All components aboard your ship are legal for its class, and a cargo scan revealed nothing out of the ordinary. You are clear to go through any civilian entrance of your choosing. Welcome to Twilight Station.”

Jordan steered the Perseus towards one of the entrance bays. He looked for Task Force Odyssey, but it was already out of sight. “I hope that Casey lady doesn’t let anyone important know about us. There could be soldiers waiting for us as we step off the ship.”

“I personally never expected to stay very long with your fleet, so I asked that my ships not be put into the Independence’s records. If Tresia’s goons copied all the data in those computers, hopefully my ship’s details won’t be in there. How are they supposed to figure out who we are if they don’t know about the ship we’re using,” said Owen

“There’s always a chance.”

“That there is.” Owen stood up and opened a chest, pulling out two handguns. “I’m not taking any chances,” he said, tossing one to Jordan.

The Perseus joined up with a line of freighters that were traveling into the station, and finally flew through the opening into the station’s interior. Dozens of ships traveled through the internal passageways. The Perseus broke off from the freighter group and traveled through several passageways on its own.

“Jesus,” said Owen. “Just how long did they take to build this?”

“At least fifteen years,” said Jordan. “My dad used to work here when this was still just a trading dock. Then I came along.”

“Must have got some space spirit from him, eh?” asked Owen.

“Ugh, I guess so. I haven’t seen him in years. We’re not very close.”

The Perseus exited the passageway and entered another cavern-like space. Dozens of docking bays and hangars lined the walls, while clamps were at the bottom for large ships. Several frigates occupied those spaces. Smaller craft zipped from place to place, constantly arriving at and leaving from the bays.

“According to this map, this area has several hotels. Should we lay low for a while?” asked Owen, who was looking at a directory for Twilight Station.

“I would be more than happy to sleep in a bed that isn’t on a ship. I’ll need some of disguise, though,” replied Jordan.

“Way ahead of you,” Owen, who was now looking at police wanted lists. “This has a list of your identifying features. Take care of those, and hope that people don’t look too hard.”

“Got it. Find us a place to dock. I can’t wait to get out of this ship,” said Jordan, heading for the bathroom. Once inside, he poured out the black ink from several pens he found aboard the Perseus into the sink. After diluting it slightly, he rinsed his normally dark brown hair in it. After drying it, he found that it did the job of making his hair black. Satisfied with results, he pulled it into a ponytail, instead of letting it hang near his shoulders, as he usually did. He removed his ear piercings, and examined his facial hair, which he had allowed to grow in hopes of providing a basic disguise. He then put on a sweatshirt, pulling the hood over his head.

 

Owen flew the Perseus into a docking cradle on the upper part of the docking area. The ship settled onto the pad, and a connecting tube extended from a nearby hub. Once it connected and a green light was shown, Owen opened the hatch and the two stepped out. After a quick walk through the connecting tube, Jordan and Owen entered the hub, which connected to several other docking spaces. Several people sat in the various rows of seats that were scattered. Ship statuses flashed on screens mounted on the wall. Several children looked out the windows, watching the ships fly by.

A man who must have been the docking controller stepped up to them, holding a tablet computer. “How long do you two intend to dock your ship here?”

“Two nights at most, mostly likely just one,” said Owen.

The man frowned. “I have a cargo ship coming in to dock at the space your ship is in.”

“You have other spaces, don’t you?” asked Owen.

“All ten of the spaces in this hub are taken. I would let you stay, but I’ve got some impatient people waiting for this cargo ship to dock. They have to confirm some shipment or some other thing like that.”

Jordan spoke, disguising his voice, making it deeper than it usually was. “This is a regular docking area. Send them to a cargo area for that.”

“They aren’t unloading any cargo here. They would be at the freighter bays if they were. Now, please, can you move-“

Jordan handed the man several credit bills. “Can I persuade you?”

The man smiled. “I can really use that, thank you. Keep your ship there. I will reschedule the cargo ship. Enjoy your stay.” With that, the man went and talked to the people who must have been the affiliates of the cargo ship. One swore loudly when it was explained that the cargo ship would have to wait.

Jordan and Owen left the docking hub, briefly stopping to pay for the use of the docking space. After the payment was made, the two boarded a monorail-like system. The doors shut after they stepped on. After about five minutes, the train stopped in a commercial district of the station. Jordan and Owen got off and walked toward the center of the district, soaking in the sights. Flashing signs and advertisement banners crowded the walls of the area, displaying everything from food to movies. People walked through to the various shops and attractions, the sea of voices sounding like a crashing wave. Several soldiers walked by, making Jordan’s heart pound. However, the soldiers didn’t appear to be looking for anyone, their eyes simply scanned the sights of the area just like any other person. The only real difference separating them from a regular civilian were their blue berets, hair tied in ponytails, simple uniforms, and pistols at their sides. After seeing an appealing restaurant, Jordan and Owen moved through the crowd.

“Glad to be out of that crowd,” Jordan.

“No kidding,” said Owen, “After being on a ship for such a long time, being on a station like this takes some getting used to.

A robot came and took their orders. After it left, Jordan leaned forward. “You’re a communications expert. How can we talk to Altos without anyone catching on?”

“Jordan, you know a lot already, what would you do? I just came along to give you some help if something screwed up.”

“Well, we’ll just contact him from whatever hotel room we’ll be in. We’ll use your signal scrambler to hide our location, and we’ll call him directly. I don’t want some stupid secretary not letting us talk to him.”

“You’ve got it down, Jordan. I’ll get my computer from the Perseus later today.”

The robotic waiter returned with their food, and the two ate in silence. After they had finished about half their food, Owen put his fork down. “Soldiers, behind you. Five of them.”

Jordan glanced quickly. Some of the soldiers had taken their berets off and were sitting down at some of the tables. One was giving the waiter his order. Jordan leaned back and eavesdropped on their conversation.

“-I am so glad to be off our shift! Old Stone Heart won’t even let us get some god damn lunch! What does he want us to do, starve or something?” said one.

“Oh, quit complaining, Higgins! You’re a soldier, for godsakes. There are a lot worse things than being hungry when you’re in the Navy these days,” said another, who appeared to be the leader of the group.

“Damn right there are. Still, putting up with Jim Ebyon’s shit is the worst thing next to wrestling a Drengin. Man, just walking through the restaurant district, smelling all that good stuff…” said the first.

“We’re already hungry enough, thank you very much!” said a third soldier.

The soldiers got their food and began to devour it. The one that had told the soldier Higgins to be quiet belched loudly and stood up, putting a tip in the jar on the counter. Then he looked at Owen, and did a double-take. “Holy shit! Owen Derekson! How’ve you been man?”

Owen gave Jordan a worried look. He then turned back to the soldier who had recognized him. “Andy Tannerson, how are you?”

Andy Tannerson walked over, pulled a chair over from a nearby table, and sat down. “Long time no see, Owen. How’ve you been, Locke? Don’t worry, we won’t bring you in! Even if you appeared suddenly in President Bradley’s office like that Draginol thing did, even he wouldn’t arrest you. Half the Army and Navy don’t know what the Altarians are smoking, outlawing you like that. You ought to be knighted for all the stuff you’ve done,” he said in a quiet tone, to make sure no one could hear.

Jordan laughed and pulled off his hood, letting his hair out of the ponytail. “Thanks.”

“A fairly simple disguise there. It’ll fool the average idiot,” said Tannerson.

“I overheard you talking about Admiral Ebyon a few seconds ago,” said Jordan.

“Ugh, yeah. What an asshole.”

“I served under him briefly. He’s what you call ‘old school’.”

Tannerson laughed. “He certainly is. He’s one of the few that still inspects uniforms for the tiniest details, makes you walk in step, keep your hair really short, and all that shit. Then again, we’re at Twilight Station instead of on the front lines, so I can’t complain too much.”

“How long have you been here?”

“About four months, actually.”

“You’ve been living in paradise. I’ve trapped outside of Earth, fighting the Drengin for nearly two years.”

“Oh, yeah! You were in that fleet that got stuck when the shield was put up. Why didn’t they lower the shield?!”

“The Drengin were coming towards Earth like a missile on fire, the Dread Lords were out there, and the shield probably took a long time to deploy. A lot of good came out of that event, though.”

“How?”

“You’ll learn about what happened eventually,” said Jordan. “I can’t explain it all now.”

“I see.”

“Now, do you know where Commodore Altos is? I need to speak with him.”

“He’s not at Twilight Station. He’s leading one of the fleets with Admiral Evars. You can talk to him remotely. Why do you want to talk to him?”

“It’s private.”

“You’re really not wanting to go into details, are you?”  asked Tannerson in an annoyed tone.

“Look, I would if I could. Some of this info needs to be kept a secret,” said Jordan.

“Got it. Now, my men and I should get back to base. Watch out for each other, okay? This war is going to eat us all alive.” Tannerson stood up and led his men out of the restaurant.

Jordan and Owen finished eating and left a few minutes later. After walking for about ten minutes, the two found a cheap hotel. After paying, Jordan went up to the room, while Owen went back to the Perseus to get his laptop, which had advanced communication software.

 

“Finally,” said Owen, who had just returned. “There are just so many people down there.” He put the computer down on a table by the wall, turning it on and activating the software.

“Please select a calling destination,” chimed the software.

“Locate and call Altos Carniss,” ordered Owen.

“Calling,” said the software.

Owen turned to Jordan. “Now, let’s hope your friend Altos is still willing to help us."

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This series is incredible so far. I hope you know, Etrius, we are all waiting patiently for the next installment (I understand that life is busy). KUTGW!

Nikolai

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Yes nice one mon General-this trilogy rocking as always :D

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New chapter for you guys. About damn time, huh?:)

Chapter 3

Altos’ face appeared on the screen. “This is Commodore Carniss. Can I help you?”

“Yes,” said Owen, “But first I’d like you to secure your channel to prevent eavesdropping.”

“It already is,” said Altos. “I noticed that you sent your signal directly to me instead of connecting through a secretary. Why?”

Jordan sat down in front the computer, its mounted camera focusing on him. “Is this a good enough reason?”

Altos kept a neutral expression. “A voice in the back of my head told me it might have to do something with you. I can talk only for a short time, Jordan. What do you need?”

“I want to get back into the war, Altos. Can you get the bounty of my head?”

“First you need to explain yourself,” Altos sighed. “Jordan, you kicked over a hornet’s nest by killing those Uslynthinis members. Both the Terran Alliance and the Altarian Republic have declared you an enemy. People are upset about it, and news commentators have been discussing the charges. Tresia’s story has some gaping flaws in it, but she has power, and with a bounty that high, there are plenty of people that would sacrifice national pride for money.”

“That’s happened often throughout history,” snorted Jordan.

“Don’t change the subject. What the hell were you thinking, killing people that powerful?!”

“They snuck aboard the Independence, beat up Aelytha and Bruce, and stole information out of my ship’s computer.”

“And does that warrant a death sentence?”

“No, it doesn’t. I was, well, really upset about Aelytha getting beat up.”

“Well Jordan, I thought you had learned to not let emotion and affection cloud your judgment and actions as a military officer.”

“That was an exception, and I’m technically ex-military, though I’d like to rejoin.”

“I gave you that choice, Jordan, and you turned it down in order to risk your neck more with Ordo. Now look at what you’ve done by killing those people. We’ve lost Ordo, and we’ve lost an extremely skilled leader, you. You’ve also lost something of yours, and that is Aelytha.”

Jordan said nothing for a few seconds, then spoke. “Altos, do you know what happened to her?”

“Yes, I do. She is being held at Tresia’s estate, which at Ilykos City on Altaria. Tresia wants to reform and “cleanse” her, as she considers any Altarian to be in a relationship with a Terran to be filthy. The farther the relationship went, the more “cleansing” is needed. Did you do anything sexual with her?”

“That is personal information, Altos.”

“Did you do anything among those lines? Answer me!”

Jordan sighed. “Yes, I did.”

Altos groaned. “Knowing the way you are with women, you two probably did the act. May the Gods help Aelytha if Tresia finds out…”

“How do you know all of this?”

“Tresia is a dangerous force. I ordered her personal journals on her estate hacked into. Most of her writing is shorthand, but I have been able to deduce what some of her plans are. That’s also how I found out about Aelytha.”

“What’s going to happen to her now?”

After this we change the subject back to what it was, again. Tresia plans to take her to some ritual on Wisp, the planet near Altaria.”

“Shit. Hope it isn’t too painful.”

“I hope so too. Now, back to the bounty. I am fairly high up the chain of command, as you know. I can get the bounty off your head in the Terran Alliance. Many officers and officials will support me. Now, I hate to turn this into a bargain, but you’ll need to do something for me.”

“What?”

“You need to rejoin the Navy. You are an incredible tactician and leader. I’ve seen your scores on tactics and command tests that you had when you were at the Academy, and they were something to see. Seeing your skills fighting the Drengin and Yor, you are an invaluable asset to our civilization.”

“You got a deal, Altos. Not much of a sacrifice on my part.”

“Not much of sacrifice?! Wow…”

“How long is this going to take?”

Altos shrugged. “If I knew, I would tell you. There will be a lot factors at work here.”

“So, some examples are pushing through the red tape and idiots, and stopping Tresia from screeching and dropping her bony ass onto the whole procedure.”

Altos chuckled. “Exactly. It’s going to take time though. What are you going to do until then? Where are you, exactly?”

“Twilight Station.”

“Well, you can’t stay there forever. I’d recommend you head back to wherever you’ve been hiding outside the Terran Alliance until this is all worked out.”

“I was thinking about rescuing Aelytha.”

“Don’t even think about it, Jordan. Aelytha was a very sweet girl, but there isn’t much you can do for her now.”

“It’s a simple plan. We infiltrate Tresia’s house, find where Aelytha is being held, and escape.”

“That is not simple at all, and the odds of you successfully doing that are very, very slim!”

“I’d have some help.”

“I know. I have many people who are friends on Ilykos City, and they view you as a friend, meaning they would help you. Still, just don’t do it.”

“I’m not letting Aelytha suffer. Altaria is fairly close to Earth in terms of interstellar distance. It would be a fairly short trip.”

“Why don’t you send some of your men?”

“This may seem right out of all the movies, but this is personal.”

Altos sighed and leaned back in his chair. “Fine. Do it. If the likely event happens that you do get captured, I’ll arrange your release.”

“How?”

“I’ll negotiate, or send a special forces squad.”

Jordan smiled. “Got it. Can you send any info to help me?”

“Of course. I’m sending the access codes to Tresia’s journals, the maps of Ilykos City, and some contacts to help you out.”

“Thanks Altos.”

“Good luck, Jordan. You’re going to need it. Call me if you need anything else.” The channel closed.

“He’s clearly not excited at you playing the dashing hero,” said Owen.

“I wasn’t intending to. Your average ‘dashing hero’ does everything in broad daylight,” said Jordan.

“True,” said Owen with a yawn. “Let’s get some sleep. We should leave early. The longer we stay, the bigger chances we have of getting caught.”

“The sooner we get to Altaria, we more time we have to get Aelytha out of that old bitch’s hands. Maybe we can kill her while we’re there.”

Owen laughed. “I’d like to, but it would be another mark on your record, and more problems between the Terran Alliance and the Altarian Republic. You known Tresia’s power.”

“One can dream, Owen. One can dream.”

 

 

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Alright, it's ass-kicking time! I know the next few installments are going to be awesome!

BTW, have you ever thought of a name for the whole series? I don't really think the Altaria's Last Stand series really suits it.

Nikolai

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BTW, have you ever thought of a name for the whole series? I don't really think the Altaria's Last Stand series really suits it.

I generally refer it as the Jordan Locke series. Altaria's Last Stand is kind of the oddball of the three stories. Not only is it extremely short compared to Jordan's Revenge, it's told from behind Jim Ebyon's perspective. Jim was originally intended to be the main character, but it switched over to Jordan because it would make for a better story. It also created an unintended literary device because it showed Jordan from a completely different perspective. When I was working on Jordan's Origins prequel, I had to go back Altaria's Last Stand to view Jordan's character at the time. (Don't read what's on the thread, because I have completely overhauled the story, but haven't posted it yet.)

New chapter coming soon. Hopefully less than a month's time.:P

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Good add mon General :bebi:

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Chapter 4 is getting close to done. I should have it up by tomorrow.

Who is your favorite character in entire series so far?

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I would have to say Altos, for his valuable role as a voice of reason to Jordan's... recklessness (not that Jordan listens to him that much). He played a similiar role for Jim's stodginess in Altaria's Last Stand.

Ordo was (or hopefully is... I suspect he'll be the titular "Resurrection") really cool as well, particularly once he began adding personality upgrades. As villains go, the Dark Avatar in Jordan's Revenge was great. I doubt we've seen the last of him either...

 

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Yup the dark avatar was badass.

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Finally! Here is another chapter.

Chapter 4

Jordan and Owen woke early and prepared to leave Twilight Station. They had seen the local schedule of shipping and traffic, and noticed the large number of ships leaving during the day. With illegal trade a problem in Twlight Station, more ships were scanned and watched the days the freight convoys left the station. Leaving the station before traffic was at its peak had the risk of being noticed with fewer ships flying, but would have the advantage of being able to leave the station quicker without being heavily scanned.

Owen checked out of the hotel using an automated system; the early shifts at the desk hadn’t begun. The two then rode the train to the hub where the Perseus was docked. Jordan and Owen boarded, undocked, and began to fly through Twilight Station’s network of tunnels and passageways. The ship’s computer reported a scan of the ship from a nearby drone when the Perseus was halfway to the exit point, but a message received detailed that it was a routine scan and Perseus was free of any suspicion. The only other communication from the station was at the exit passageway, where a prerecorded message wishing them a safe journey was received. It was likely to something every ship received on the way out of Twilight Station.

Once the Perseus had left Twilight Station, Owen plotted the course to Altaria and activated the warp drive. “One and a half days to Altaria,” he said. “Let’s plan this little rescue mission.”

 

After they had slept for several hours to make up for the lost sleep leaving Twilight Station, Jordan and Owen went into the Perseus’ small galley area and began accessing files that could help them in their tasks through laptops.

Owen leaned back and took a bite out of an apple. “There is no way we can even get close to Tresia’s estate,” he said, his mouth full of food. He swallowed and continued. “There’s just too much security, even if we get people to help us.”

“Exactly,” said Jordan, looking at Tresia’s journals.

“This really isn’t a helpful question, but what do you suppose we do?”

Jordan continued to study the journals. “It would be easier to come up with a solution if this damn translator could figure out Altarian shorthand. Half of the stuff this bitch wrote seems to be just a bunch of letters. It looks like she wanted to write in a way that only she could read. Tresia is pretty paranoid, but people that are paranoid also tend to be clever.”

“I know the translators aren’t good at reading Altarian abbreviations and stuff like that, but every language is different. Can I see it?”

Jordan handed Owen the laptop, who began to type on it. “Some of this stuff is apparently unique to the way Tresia writes, but some of it isn’t. You just need to be more familiar with the language. English has its own quirks that confuse others that don’t understand it.”

“What can you understand?”

“Everything that we need to proceed with this scheme. What mighty plan do you have?”

Jordan leaned forward. “Like you said, Tresia’s estate is essentially a fortress. We can’t go in to get her, so she’ll have to come out somehow. The only way she can do that is if someone brings her out, since she’s essentially imprisoned on the property. There’s only one time that she’ll be out of that house, and that’s when she’ll be put on Tresia’s ship to be taken to that ritual on Wisp.”

Owen typed something on his laptop. “I’ve got the ship schedule for that day she leaves. Tresia’s ship, the Supremacy, is going to be docked on a public landing pad, meaning there won’t as much security.”

Jordan and Owen looked at each other, knowing that they had found their opportunity to rescue Aelytha.

“Contact some of those contacts once we’re in orbit, Owen. That ship leaves tomorrow. If it gets to Wisp, there’s no way we can get to her there.”

Owen nodded, knowing the security of the planet Wisp, which was home large military installations, the commanders of which were rumored to be aligned with Uslynthinis.

 

“Entering orbit of Altaria,” chimed the ship’s computer.

“Call Hyro Sahna from contact list,” ordered Owen. “Disguise signal location.”

“Calling,” said the computer.

After a few seconds, a shady looking Altarian with a facial tattoo in the shape of a wolf appeared on the screen. “Who are you, and what do you want?” asked the Altarian.

“Are you Hryo Sahna?” asked Owen.

“Yes, but who are you?”

“My name is Owen Derekson. Are you familiar with Altos Carniss?”

“I’ve known the man all my life. Now what do you want?”

“Altos said you could help us. Judging by what we know about you, you lead a small group of freelance mercenaries, is that true?”

“During the war I did, but now me and my buddies do various odd jobs. Now, if you don’t tell me what you want, I’m going to hang up.”

“We would like to use the services of you and your men. Can you infiltrate a docked starship?”

“Depends on what it is,” said Hryo, still appearing uninterested.

Owen sent the details of the Supremacy to Hryo.

“Hmmm. A Shonyn-Class personal transporter. With enough people to do the right things, this ship is fairly easy. The info says this ship belongs to none other than the queen of political idiots: Tresia Kholonus. That woman ripped me off, and I want back at her. What are we going to steal: the ship, money, what else?”

Jordan spoke up. “Tresia has someone important held aboard that ship that we need to rescue.”

Hryo smiled. “Before the war, I excelled in hostage rescue for law enforcement. You found the right guy. This should be fairly easy. Get aboard, mess up security, get the person, and get out.”

“How much do you charge?”

“For something like this, I’m asking ten thousand credits.”

Owen sighed. “Wiring the money now.”

“Got the funds. Where do we meet?”

“I sent in a docking request to Ilykos City. We’ll be at Hangar 04 in less than two hours. Be there.”

“I will.” Hryo closed the channel.

Owen groaned. “That was out of my personal funds. Altos or someone else better compensate me for this.”

“Hopefully,” said Jordan. “Beginning atmospheric entry.”

 

The Perseus dove through the layers of clouds in Altaria’s atmosphere, speeding towards Ilykos City. After one last cloud, the city came into view. One of Altaria’s “Island City-buildings”, Ilykos was essentially a giant skyscraper holding an entire population of around three hundred thousand. From an oval shaped base, two thick spires emerged, tipped by large statues. Balconies and landing pads stuck out in neat rows throughout the building. The glass of the city appeared turquoise from the ocean surrounding it, whose waves gently washed against a seawall and marina far below. The city was ringed by several rock formations, which had arches made to accommodate access by water. Jordan and Owen had been the city before during military missions, but it was still an impressive sight to behold.

Jordan found the hangar that they had been allowed to dock in and moved the ship towards it, preferring to dock internally to avoid the chance of the ship being spotted and potentially recognized. After checking the local time, he released the controls to the autopilot, which flew the ship into one of several access tunnels that ran throughout the building. As the ship continued towards its destination, Jordan observed Ilykos. There was a great deal of empty space inside, honeycombed by various walkways and internal towers. Plants grew everywhere, looking as much of a part of the building as all the windows. Most of all, however, Jordan noticed a distinct lack of things that made up many Terran cities, such as billboards.

Eventually, the Perseus arrived at the hangar, deployed its landing skids, and settled on the surface. Jordan and Owen pocketed their guns, and several other weapons. Owen chose a compactable nightstick, while Jordan chose his knife. After disembarking, Jordan and Owen looked around and saw several Altarians standing around, including Hryo.

“About time,” said the Altarian, walking up to them, “We’ve been observing Tresia’s ship. She seems a bit overconfident, because there isn’t nearly as much security as she usually has. Unless they were all aboard the ship, this should be fairly easy.”

“Don’t get overconfident yourself,” said Jordan.

“I didn’t say I would be,” said Hryo in an annoyed tone.

“Back to this little rescue,” said Jordan. “Altos provided me with a lot of useful equipment, such as codebreakers, lockpicks, and elimination devices, as I call them.”

“I know the first two, but what the hell is the third?” asked Hryo.

“It will put even the toughest guards to sleep, enough electricity to cause unconsciousness or even death.”

Hryo smiled. “Nice.”

“I also have several other important things like these fake badges. Only a Yor could tell the difference between the real thing and this.”

Owen spoke up. “Every moment we stand around is less time to get to the ship. Let’s go.”

 

After taking several elevators and shuttles to the upper part of the city, the group walked onto the platform where Tresia’s ship, the Supremacy was docked.

One of Hryo’s men said something in Altarian. Hryo translated in a low voice, saying that the man was wishing that he owned a ship like the Supremacy.

Jordan smiled slightly. “This piece of shit is nothing compared to the Perseus.”

The group continued towards the ship. They were almost at the entry ramp when several guards stopped them. Hryo walked up the guards and began to talk. Eventually Hryo showed the fake badges to the gurads, who examined them and stepped aside, allowing entry into the ship. At times like this, I really wish I had a decent audio translator, thought Jordan.

“I just had to give the little story to get aboard. If you knew me longer you’d know I’m an excellent liar. He said to be careful of High Priestess Kresta. She’s performing a ritual on one of the prisoners right now. He said it was something about one of the prisoners resisting. He said it was the girl,” muttered Hryo. “The ship sure smells like the priestess, that’s for sure. What a foul woman.”

“If I’m right, that girl is the one we’re rescuing. Send your men to disable the holding cell cameras.”

Hryo listened to his earpiece. “They already have security under control. They can do anything with the ship now.”

“Where are the holding cells?”

Hryo asked the question quickly into his earpiece in Altarian, then quickly motioned for Jordan and one of the others to follow him. After a few seconds of sprinting they arrived at the entrance to the holding area without meeting anyone. Jordan used a codebreaker to get past the locked door, and the three stepped inside.

Two guards were looking over the three cells, their backs turned towards the entrance. The door to the middle cell was open, and a raspy-voiced woman was chanting something in Altarian wearing a brown cloak was seen bending over the cell’s cot. Jordan could hear the groans and muffled half-sobs of the girl who lay on the cot, whose voice he recognized as Aelytha’s. His heart began to pound, and he looked at Hryo and nodded.

Hryo and other Altarian quickly and noiselessly subdued the guards. Jordan stormed toward the woman who was likely Priestess Kresta,  quickly came up with a plan of attack, and struck. He quickly and violently cuffed the woman’s throat, using a military technique designed to suppress a scream. He then threw a right hook into the woman’s side, and followed up by driving his knee into the woman’s hip. Jordan intended to use another move to create total unconsciousness, but his moves had so much force behind them that the priestess flipped sideways, nearly head over heels, and landing hard on her neck, making a loud crack.

After checking to see if the woman was dead or alive, Jordan stood up. Aelytha was partially sitting up, looking at the priestess’ body and trembling with fear. Once she saw Jordan, she simply stared, several tears rolling down her cheeks. She opened her to speak, but Jordan put his hand over her mouth and helped her stand up. Hryo muttered something to his henchman in Altarian.

“Let’s get out of here, Aelytha,” said Jordan in a low tone.

“Jordan, we need to hurry,” said Hryo. “I got an update from my men. Some more of the ship’s crew is coming aboard. We need to be off before they get here.”

“Got it,” said Jordan. He pulled the cloak off the priestess and gave it to Aelytha, who wordlessly put it on, pulling the hood over her head.

After Aelytha was sufficiently disguised, Jordan checked in the other cells, but there was no one in them. The other prisoners were likely with the remaining part of the crew. Before leaving, Jordan and Hryo lifted the body of the priestess onto the bed, pulling up the thin sheet and tilting the face away from the visible security camera.

“Our work here is done, Hryo. Let’s get off this damn ship.”

Hyro gave the orders to his men over his earpiece. After meeting up, Hryo checked outside, then waved everyone else out. The group made their way back the elevator at a slower pace to avoid attracting attention. As Jordan was about to step aboard the elevator, he saw the guards that were stationed at the entrance ramp appear from behind to ship and take their usual places. As the elevator door closed, Jordan saw Tresia emerge onto the landing pad.

Once they were out of sight, everyone moved rapidly through Ilykos back to where the Perseus was docked. Owen checked around to make sure nothing that changed, then opened the entry hatch.

“Well, this is it,” said Hryo. “We had quite a bit of skill and luck getting that girl off Tresia’s ship.”

“A pleasure working with you,” said Jordan, and turned to enter the ship.

“Wait,” said Hryo.

“Yeah?” asked Jordan.

“You never told me your name. What is it?”

“My name is on a list of those that people want in jail right now, to put it lightly,” said Jordan.

“Same here,” shrugged Hryo. “I’m no angel.”

“Fine. I’m Jordan Locke.”

Hryo raised his eyebrows. “I can’t believe I didn’t recognize you before. Look, people that Tresia has under her boot secretly love you. I won’t tell anyone about what happened today. Man, I just did something with the man himself…”

Jordan smiled.

“Look, Jordan. This may sound weird, but if you need a place to lay low if you’re in Ilykos again, just let me know. You’re my kind of scum,” said Hryo with a laugh.

Jordan was about to say something when an alert over a public announcement system sounded. As expected, it was in Altarian. Hryo listened briefly, then shouted, “You’d better get out of here fast! They just discovered what we did. The usual trade convoy is leaving about now. Fly with them for a while, and go to a different city on the other side of Altaria before you leave the planet. They’re going to be watching the air and space over Ilykos for a while. Good luck, and watch yourself out there!”

Jordan quickly ran aboard the Perseus and closed the hatch as Owen began the takeoff procedure. Jordan took his seat in the cockpit in time to see Hryo wave briefly before the ship left the hangar and sped out of Ilykos.

 

“I cannot believe we just did that!” said Owen. “Tresia’s probably screaming with rage right now.”

“Good,” said Jordan. “I just wish we could have helped those other prisoners. Problem is, what would we do with them after we freed them?”

“True,” said Owen.

Jordan and Owen sat silently for a few seconds, then Jordan spoke. “Hryo is right. We need to find a place to lay low for a while. Tresia probably has the political influence to make the local military forces comb the area for any suspicious ships. This ship stands out somewhat.”

“Agreed. We’ll fly with this trade convoy for a while. We can figure out where to hide later.”

“Got it,” said Jordan, who got up and left the cockpit, leaving Owen to fly the ship. He climbed down to the Perseus’ lower and entered his cabin. Aelytha sat on his bunk, her head in her hands. Jordan sat down next to her. “Aelytha?” he asked.

Aelytha gave no response.

“Are you okay?”

Only silence came from her.

“Aelytha, I’m sorry that all this happened. If I could have come here to rescue you earlier, I would have.”

“I’m not mad, Jordan,” said Aelytha in a small voice.

Jordan put his arm around Aelytha, and she leaned against him and began to cry. He held her for a while, comforting her. What did you do to her, Tresia?

After Aelytha had calmed down, the two went back up to the cockpit. Jordan slid into his usual place, while Aelytha sat in the seat behind them.

“What’s the situation at Ilykos?”

“The translator’s having a hard time understanding the chatter from the security forces. They’re talking very fast, and over each other.”

“You’ve got a translator, Owen,” said Aelytha. She listened to the radio for a while, then spoke. “They’re practically turning Ilykos City and the area around it inside out looking for us. The skies and space above the city are being watched. I overheard you and Jordan talking about a place to hide. I know a place we can stay for a while.”

“Where would that be?” asked Owen.

“It’s an extra apartment my parents own. It has fake registration and papers. My parents had some enemies when they were in the Altarian Senate, so this is a place that they could retreat to when the Senate threatened to break down.”

Jordan and Owen both looked at Aelytha.

“Your parents were Altarian Senators?!” asked Owen.

“Well, my father was a major one. My mother was sort of his representative.”

“Where are they now?” asked Owen.

Aelytha looked down at the cockpit floor. “They’re dead. They died as I started to study at a university.”

“I’m sorry,” said Owen.

“No, no,” said Aelytha. “Don’t worry.” She quickly entered the coordinates of where the apartment was.

Jordan leaned back in his chair. During their time together on the Independence, he knew that Aelytha’s parents worked in the Altarian government, but Aelytha never told him that they were in the Senate, or that they were dead. He also noticed Aelytha was clearly bottling her emotions. The time that her parents died was still fairly recent, less than eight years, given Aelytha’s age.

 

After two and a half hours of traveling at top atmospheric speed, the Perseus arrived at its destination as the sun was beginning to set. The name of the settlement was nearly unpronounceable, but was situated on a group of islands like Ilykos. However, the town was tiny compared to Ilykos, with only around eight thousand people. Several white high-rise buildings rose above the lush islands, which formed a ring-like shape around the clear blue water.

 The Perseus touched down at the docking area on one of the islands, landing between several other ships. The three disembarked and took a hovercraft shuttle to the building where Aelytha’s apartment was. They entered the lobby, where the receptionist droid scanned Aelytha’s retina to confirm her identity, giving a card key afterwards. After an elevator ride to the near top, Aelytha unlocked the door to the apartment, and the three stepped inside.

“Nice place,” said Jordan, looking around. “We should be able to stay here for a while.”

After settling in, the three eventually ate and watched local media through a translator. After Owen went to bed, Jordan checked the local Earth time and called Altos.

Altos’ faced flashed onto the screen. “Jordan?”

Aelytha saw what Jordan was doing and stood next to him, smiling at Altos through the connection.

Altos returned the smile. “Glad to see that you rescued her, Jordan. That explains the news story going on at Ilykos. There aren’t any suspects yet. You and whoever you worked with did a good job.” He then looked at Aelytha and said something to her in Altarian.

Aelytha smiled and put her hand and Jordan’s shoulder.

“Jordan, where are you right now? I can’t trace your signal.”

“We’re at Aelytha’s family’s apartment.”

“She told me about that place. Stay there for a few days until the buzz about what happened at Ilykos fades. However, if anything about a suspect comes up that concerns you, get out of there, and come back to Twilight Station as quickly as possible.”

“Got it.”

“I have to leave to speak with several Admirals soon, so this will be it for now.”

“All right, Altos. Bye.” said Jordan, closing the link.

After Jordan had shut off the computer, he quickly went to his room and went to bed. After he had turned off the light, he saw heard someone enter, and quickly figured out it was Aelytha. Before he could speak she got in bed with him. He moved slightly and held her, ecstatic at their reunion.

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Good post! Things look to be moving along fast now - I personally expected it to be a few more chapters before our hero rescued his lady fair (although lately I'm growing a tad irritated by the number of Terran/Altarian relationships in GalCiv AARs). No offense meant by that - but when do we get back to the war??

Also, just how much power does the Uslynthinis Movement have in Altarian society? Originally it sounded like they were just a fringe hate group, but more and more, they're looking like a major force.

Anyway, nicely done. On with the AAR!

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"but when do we get back to the war??"

I, for one, am not too concerned about this. However, I would imagine, since Jordon wants to rejoin, the Navy wants him, and he has Aelytha back, he'll try to get back in the captain's chair as soon as possible. The Royal Vengeance and Independence are still waiting for him to return. 

"Jordan noticed a distinct lack of things that made up many Terran cities, such as billboards."

Yay, no billboards!

BTW, Aelytha is pronounced Ay-lith-ah, correct? It's not as obvious as the others.

Nikolai

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Thanks for the feedback guys. I should have another chapter up soon. Now to answer a few reader questions:

Also, just how much power does the Uslynthinis Movement have in Altarian society? Originally it sounded like they were just a fringe hate group, but more and more, they're looking like a major force.

It did start out as a fringe group, but it has grown. Remember the discussions about it in Jordan's Revenge. Also, Tresia is extremely wealthy. With money, you can make anything happen, even in Altarian society.

I'm growing a tad irritated by the number of Terran/Altarian relationships in GalCiv AARs).

I've read plenty of AAR's and I've never read about a Terran/Altarian relationship. Or maybe I've forgotten.

BTW, Aelytha is pronounced Ay-lith-ah, correct? It's not as obvious as the others.

Close. It's pronouced Ay-uh-lith-ah. Hope that clears any confusion up.

 Remember everyone: Questions are always welcome.

 

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Thanks for the answers General. With the exception of mambaman's "The General and the President", I cannot name any AARs with human/Altarian relationships off the top of my head, but it just feels like they're more common then relationships between humans and humans (to say nothing of humans and other aliens!). Sometimes it seems like the Altarians are getting cast in the same "snooty, mystic, better-looking human" role as elves in a lot of fantasy.

That clears up some of my questions about Uslynthinis as well (on the topic of pronouciation, is it "oos-lin-thin-is" or "uz-lin-thin-is"?). Although I'm a bit surprised that it's growing now of all times: with Terrans and Altarians fighting side by side against the Drengin, I'd expect race relations to grow closer, not for hate groups to thrive. I've said this before, but I do like the concept - it's good to see a "dark side" to the Altarians, and it's nice that humans aren't the xenophobes like the way it usually is.

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Apologies for the lond delays. My PC has unfortunatly crashed, so it may a bit longer before something new is posted. I am working on getting it fixed as I type this.

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Ouch, that sucks. We can wait, no worries.

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My PC is up and running, and I've started writing again.

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All right, here is another chapter!

Chapter 5

Altos walked through the halls of the newly commissioned TAS Resolve, toward the war room where the others were waiting for him. As he continued toward his destination, various crew member stopped and saluted him as he passed. Finally, he arrived at the war room. Before entering, he looked at his reflection to make sure his appearance was in perfect order. He wasn’t one that was usually concerned with appearances, but today was different. Today he was asked to attend an important meeting concerning the state of the war with none other than the President of the Terran Alliance and the other top officers of the armed forces.

President Alan Bradley stood up from the head of the table as Altos entered. “Welcome, Commodore Carniss.”

Altos snapped off a crisp salute. “Thank you, sir.” He took a seat where it was labeled for him. After looking around, he recognized some of the officers attending, including Admiral Jim Ebyon and Admiral Adam Evars. Jim gave Altos a quick smile.

President Bradley sat back down and began to speak. “Ladies and Gentlemen of the Terran Armed Forces, I have summoned you to discuss an extremely important turn of events. Colonel Jenna Casey, who we have long regarded as MIA, has returned with a shocking discovery involving the return of another long lost civilization and the potential power they hold. Ladies and Gentlemen, this is Colonel Casey.”

Colonel Casey walked into the room and stood by a presenting screen. “During the time the Drengin War had begun, the task force under my command had lost all communication with the rest of the Terran Alliance. Our communications array was in perfect condition, yet it somehow was not functional. Our guess is that an electrical field, such as a charged nebula, was responsible. Not sure of what to do, we continued on. Eventually we arrived at star system with a single planet in orbit. Scanners detected a presence down on the otherwise barren surface. I sent a team down to look. The team reported that they had found what appeared to be an ancient ruin of the planet’s surface. When they entered, the found someone, or something inside. This being revealed itself to be an Arnor, who we thought were long gone. This Arnor, who calls himself Tandis, gave extremely important information about the Dread Lords and what has happ-“

“I thank you for your effort, Colonel Jenna Casey, but I feel that I can explain about all this,” said a powerful-sounding voice that seemed to come from the entire room.

Everyone in the room looked around, confused. Admiral Ebyon scowled, clearly annoyed at whoever had interrupted.

Suddenly, what Colonel Casey had described as an Arnor appeared in the room. “Greeting to what appears to be the leaders on the Terran Alliance.”

Altos spoke up. “Are you-“

“Yes, I am Tandis, said the Arnor. “I wish to give information about what can be used to destroy the Dark Arnor, or the Dread Lords as you call them.”

“Go ahead,” said Altos.

Tandis opened his hand and showed a large crystal to everyone in the room. “This is a piece of the Telenanth, one of five shards that remained when the Telenanth was shattered many ages ago. We the Arnor did not evolve naturally like you. We were created by this crystal. We do not know where it originally came from, or how. What we do know is that our entire essence is contained with each of the shards, and that they contain unbelievable power, more than your minds could ever comprehend. We used the Telenanth to build our empire by channeling their power through some that I will call the Orb of Forging. We created entire stars using the Telenanth if it was necessary. These crystals help give us our power, which you have unfortunately experienced at the hands of the Dread Lords.”

Everyone in the room nodded.

“Now, the Dread Lords can be destroyed. You can use your methods of brute force, which you have lost many of your people with. Or you can use the Telenanth.”

“That crystal can be used to create anything, as you said before, but how would we use it to defeat the Dread Lords?” asked Admiral Evars.

“There are several options,” replied Tandis. “I can show you one.” The shard of the Telenanth began to glow brightly in his hand, illuminating the room with a dazzling aura. After a minute, the glow faded, and the walls of the room twisted and swirled. When it stopped, the occupants of the room saw that they were in a representation of the space of f the side of the Resolve. It was simply an illusion created by Tandis; Altos could still feel his now invisible chair underneath him. Still, his amazement at Tandis’ ability was overshadowed by what had appeared. A large ship, shaped like a crystal formation had appeared next to the Resolve. It was roughly the same size, but the sheer presence of it made the Resolve seem tiny.

Everyone in the room except for Tandis was dumbstruck by what had happened.

Tandis spoke again. “What I have created using the Telenanth is a ship our civilization once used. It is now at your service. I have modified everything to suit your needs. It will serve you well.” Tandis ended the space illusion, and the walls of the war room swirled back into vision. “It will be some time before this piece of the Telenanth recovers the energy it needs to produce another creation, so do not be careless with the ship.”

“Good god,” muttered Evars. “I’m picking up readings from that ship that suggest that it had one hundred times more power than the best battleship we have now. The Drengin will scramble back from our fleets once we unleash this thing on them.”

“There is another option besides suffering while waiting for another ship to be created for you to use. The Telenanth contains our essence, as I have said. If we can have all of the shards in our possession, we can destroy them.”

“What would happen?” asked Altos.

“The Dread Lords and I would will either die or lose our power, becoming nothing but shadows of what we once were. I can see that you do not want to lose me, but it is for the greater good. The Dread Lords must be stopped. They use the Telenanth to increase their power and multiply their strength. Ever since they were released, I have known that they have been slowly increasing in number, though there are still only a handful of them.”

The room was quiet for a moment.

“Now, there would be two ways to destroy these crystals. One would be use the Orb of Forging, but when the Dread Lords were banished to the pocket universe, the Orb went into the pocket universe as well. I don’t what has happened to it since then.”

Evars spoke up. “Our fleet entered that pocket universe. Our deep space scans didn’t find anything unusual there.”

“The Dread Lords must have destroyed somehow. It is a tragedy that such an event took place, because the second way is much more chaotic. If we can find all of the crystals, I can build a chamber that can absorb and magnify energy from a particular source. When the energy contained by the Telenanth is at its maximum, adding a certain amount of energy will push the crystal beyond its limit and cause it to break apart. In my many years of solitude, I have pondered whether this is what caused the Telenanth to shatter in the first place.”

“How much energy are we going to need?” asked Evars.

“The amount of energy cannot be made artificially. It must come from something extremely powerful. The only source great enough would be a supernova.”

Everyone in the room muttered amongst themselves.

“I know how to harness the energy of a supernova. I will create enough reception areas which would feed into a collection chamber and further magnify it, which would cause the crystals to explode, ending the both the Arnor and the Dread Lords. Now, there are no supernovas in the galaxy that are set to occur at this time.”

“Then how do we do this?” asked Ebyon.

“It will require technology that I am not happy to share with you. But I must.”

“Wait,” said Ebyon slowly. “Are you saying that we are going to make a star go supernova?”

“Yes,” said Tandis. “Once we have the shards of the Telenanth, I will reveal what we must do.”

“Tandis, do you have any idea where the other four shards may be?”

“Out of the five, only four remain, including the one here. During the Great War, the Arnor used the Orb of Forging to sacrifice a shard in order to create enough energy in order to form the pocket universe. We must now find the remaining three. Their location is elusive; it is impossible for me to pinpoint their exact location. But, what I do know is that they are all in the area where all these civilizations have stretched out to. This swath of stars was Dread Lord territory during our war, so they must have hid the shards among these planets.”

“And knowing the Dread Lords, they’ve likely remembered where they hid those shards,” groaned Evars. “To get these shards, we’re going to have to go into Dread Lord territory. This is not going to be easy.”

“Indeed,” said Tandis. “They are not as numerous as you would think, for you have destroyed many of them. Several powerful ones died over the planet you call Toria. Still, the remaining ones are still a grave threat, as well as who they control, a group of beings you call ‘the Korath’. The Dread Lords have tainted their minds, granting them power and abilities to betray the ones they once stood beside.”

“Can you help us find the crystals?” inquired President Bradley. “We can’t complete this task until all of the crystals are in the hands of the Terran Alliance.”

“I pledge myself to your cause, Alan Bradley. I will help in any way I can, but even the Arnor cannot work miracles. I will create new ships for your fleets whenever I can, but for more frequent completions, I will need more shards. As I get closer to a particular shard, its location becomes more clear. I would have taken all the shards if the Dread Lords had not been released. If you can secure the area that a shard is in, I will be able to show you where it is.”

The room faded again, turning into what appeared to be the charted galaxy. Three white hazes appeared around several clumps of stars, and a green one appeared around Earth.

Altos leaned forward. “So, I’m guessing that those clouds are where the shards might be?”

“Yes,” said Tandis. “As we already have one, it does not need to be shown.” The green haze faded. “But these others are what we need to find.” Tandis ended the illusion.

“We’re going to have to get that map recorded,” said Evars. Once we have that in our data banks, we can start searching.”

The Telenanth shard glowed for a second, and a data disc appeared on the table.

“That will do,” said Tandis. “I will return whenever help is needed.” A brief flash occurred, and Tandis had disappeared as quickly as he had come.

President Bradley stood up. “Everyone, get this operation moving now! We have no time to waste! Colonel Casey, come with me. I must speak to you concerning your most beneficial actions.”

“Of course, sir,” said Casey.

“Everyone, a plan must be formulated. You should fly to the command center in Washington D.C. and figure this out. We won’t get very many chances at this. If we can’t get those shards we’re going to have to fight the Dread Lords the old fashioned way, and we can not afford that!” said Bradley.

“Of course,” said Ebyon. “Get a shuttle ready!”

Everyone understood what was to be done, and quickly moved out of the war room where events many would have thought impossible had occurred.

Reply #23 Top

Nice.

I'll post a longer review later... probably much later as I'm about to leave for New Jersey (and not taking my laptop with me).

Reply #25 Top

Evars spoke up. “Our fleet entered that pocket universe. Our deep space scans didn’t find anything there unusual there.”

Typo!

Besides that, excellent entry. Can't wait for the next!

Nikolai