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The Early Years

The Early Years

A comprehensive history of humanity in space pre-trade order

I'm now working on the ninth chapter.

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Reply #26 Top

Use lots of technical terms. It sounds professional that way.

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Reply #27 Top

Watch Eureka on Hulu...  Surprisingly, it is somewhat realistic and gives some ideas as far as the things you can put in a book...

Reply #28 Top

The Mari Formata

The truth is, I think, that this whole timeline is not making a lot of sense to anyone. So I'm going to cut to the chase and record the early years of the Sins universe proper. Below is a partial map of the galaxy in 2395, for clarity, and below that is the first chapter in the Mari Formata saga.

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/EmberFive/SoaSE/2584-c2870.jpg

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Reply #29 Top

hey! i liked the timeline! i was following pretty well i think.

just so i understand, though. there are two different ways of interstellar travel, regular ftl (like star wars) and phase space (obviously, sins)? how come they couldnt re-develop the first way.

and why does earth have to dissapear? why does it always have to dissapear?

Reply #30 Top

how come they couldnt re-develop the first way

Only part of hyperspace travel technology was rediscovered. There are still many missing pieces. What has been compiled led to the first discovery of phase space and travel using it.

and why does earth have to dissapear?

Earth never disappeared, it was just forgotten as the developed world it once was. The planet surface has been ravaged by nucleostatic warfare, and while the geography remains largely status quo, most of the ecosphere and the edifices of civilisation were razed. In the modern Sins universe, Evertha is just some petty terran planet with no real significance. Alux is presently considered to be the homeworld of the human race while Helms Kol is the de facto capital of the Trade Order.

why does it always have to dissapear?

It's status as the social, economic, cultural and political center of the galaxy was simply too great for warring factions to ever ignore it.

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Reply #31 Top

i lost interest after "Obama".

Reply #32 Top

What's that supposed to mean? I don't know what could be less obnoxious to Americans than naming an entire planet after the historically first African-American US President.

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Reply #33 Top

I too was annoyed, but then the market crash hit it.  I laughed at that.  Don't you love irony? (even if intentional...)

Reply #34 Top

You do actually find that annoying? I don't understand. The way I see it, it's highly appropriate for a whole planet to be named after the historical figure.

The Obama market crash is not significant in that it bears allusions to the real world market crash.

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Reply #35 Top

Too much Obama hype...  Sure, I'm glad we can have a black president, but I'd prefer we had one that belongs in America and not Canada...

Reply #36 Top

Helms Kol

Just as Alux is an utmostly sacred world, Helms Kol is the utmostly industrialised planet in the entire Trade Order. Helms Kol's geologically varied surface is entirely covered in a hybrid industrial/urban artificial living space and has been for as long as history has been dated. Though the galaxy is abundant with humanity's stubborn factionalism, the fact that the overlordly Prime Coordinator estabilished his office beneath these reddish dusty skies makes Helms Kol the de facto capital of the Trade Order. Many leaders of Order states have to answer to this planet some time in their lives, directly or indirectly, and as such the collective polity of the planet is massive. The mobilisation of anti-Vasari defensive forces, the exile of the Tembda Jans populace, the TEC's very inception - all these things had something, however small the involvement, to do with the political machinations of Helms Kol.

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Reply #38 Top

looks good. so earth is somewhere to the galactic NE?

Reply #39 Top

I made it quite clear in an earlier post that Evertha is Earth renamed. It's north-east of Helms Kol and south-west of Argonevv on the map.

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Reply #40 Top

ah ok. i knew that it was renamed, but did not recall the new name. now i remember. evertha, evertha

Reply #41 Top

I'm going to put the Mari Formata on hold for a while, and announce that I am working on the first chapter of the history of the Unity a.k.a. the Psion offshoot of humanity.

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Reply #43 Top

that was awesome. keep it up, the undying

Reply #44 Top

One of the problems now is that Psion history is pretty dry for the next series of centuries, up until their exile. Maybe readers could propose events to be put into the second chapter.

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Reply #45 Top

Well, I'm working on homework, but in an hour or so, I'll get to work finding something for you to put in here...

Reply #46 Top

approximately when does sins take place in your timeline?

Reply #47 Top

I don't plan this stuff out, so at the moment there is no set date for the beginning of SoaSE. I'll decide on one when I get there.

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Reply #48 Top

The second chapter in the Mari Formata.

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Reply #49 Top

approximately when does sins take place in your timeline?

At this rate, it is likely to begin in the 36th Century, with the simultaneous arrival of the Vasari and Advent.

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