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Saints of a Solar Empire - A SoaSE Story *Book 2 Complete*

Saints of a Solar Empire - A SoaSE Story *Book 2 Complete*

Well, since there's no story section to the forums (hint hint), I've decided to post a little story set in the Sins universe here.  If popular, I'll continue it.  The story begins ten years into the TEC-Vasari War, just before the involvement of the Advent.  I've taken liberty with certain elements (which I can chok up to balance-needs for the actual game), and I hope you all enjoy the story.

 

Saints of a Solar Empire, Part 1: The Road to Hades

"Four Devastator class ships closing from astern, Captain!"

"The Carrigall reports total system failure!"

"Captain, we've reached point Alpha!"

"Release the fleet for staggered phase jump! All ships are authorized to withdraw as soon as they cross the well!" Captain Forscythe commanded. He tried not to think of the twenty-five hundred individuals who just became cosmic detris as the Kol-class battleship systems were overwhelmed by the Vasari phase missile barrage. Nor did the captain try to think of the gaping hole in his own ship where the flag bridge had once when the Schuegraf's shields were pierced with one of the alien's missile storms.

The Captain felt the hum as the anti-matter reactors came online, quickly charging the capacitor rings. Already, most of the frigates had escaped into phase space requiring less anti-matter and proportionately less time to charge to enter the over-layed dimension. Despite his orders, however, a squadron of Garda-class flak frigates remained at the well-limit, bleeding Vasari bomber and fighter squadrons as they tried to pounce on the fleeing fleet units who were without the benefit of fighter cover as the carriers fled into space.

And then Forscythe's ship slid over the the gravity well of the nexus star along with her sister ship and a surviving Marza-class dreadnought. The ships powered up, to Forscythe and their crews, an aganozingly long time to power up even though he and they knew that the ship engineer crews were cutting the safety margins to zero, if not less. They ran the risk of catastrophic failure--when matter met antimatter, explosion was an understating term--but the risk of termination far outweighed the minor possibility of something as mundane as system failure.

The flag captain slumped slightly against his shock frame, having too much stubborn discipline to openly sigh. Unlike most of the Eastern Reaches fleet, he was a veteran of combat having been a mere system defense captain ten years ago. However, he gave himself a moment to feel a flicker of pride at the way his own crew had performed.

No, they weren't vertans, but they were the product of the TEC's newest training programs--the first generation in memorable history to be fully trained to serve in a unified military force for the whole, not just isolated systems, and they performed admirably. There was no hesitation in the execution of their orders, and they knew their duty.

Unlike the first few fleets who had met the Vasari in battle, where discipline and courage were found in short supply.

Forscythe quickly pushed the thoughts aside. "Communications, tie in with CIC and report on the status of the rest of the fleet according to their last data codes. Anna," said Forscythe, addressing his exec, "status report."

The slender-framed terran girl, no more than twenty five, and appearing in her late teens thanks to advances in medical science, took a moment to compose herself. The running battle with the Vasari Task Force had run the entire crew ragged, and she took a moment to check the displa before turning to her captain.

"Shields are down to fourteen percent, but they held. Any damage we sustained was due in part to the ability of the Vasari missiles to bypass our shields a certain percentage of the time. Point defence is down to eighty percent standard efficiency, Beam Three was cut from the curcuit when a missile hit the starboard side, and Doctor Hannoi reports that we have suffered approximately two hundred dead with another three injured to varying degrees. We also suffered a direct hit to the flag bridge with one hundred percent casualties, including Vice Admiral House and Rear Admiral Jerry."

The captain winced internally. Admiral House had been a good man, with a fair amount of tactical and strategic mindedness, and his loss had caused unnecessary confusion during the battle. His loss also meant that command should have passed to the next slot in the chain of command. Unfortunately, the same hit that gouged the fleet flag deck had had to cut through the battlegroup command deck which housed the Admiral commanding the capital ship component of Task Force 3, ER-TECN.

Forscythe had taken a grave risk in not passing command. The next ranking officer had been Commodore Priev commanding the battlecruiser component, and he, Forscythe thought after reading the Commodore's dossier, was a coward. He would've ordered the fleet to break cohesion and run for it. Which might have been acceptable, had the Vasari not enough ships to break with them and still destroy them...

"Captain, I have your report," almost-whispered a voice from across the room. Lieutenant Focker was a slender man from a low-grav world much the same as Forscythe's exec. Focker's voice was not quiet out of fear, but out of habit from being able to talk clearly and concisely without slur, stutter, or a need to repeat.

"Let's hear it then, Andrew."

"Aye, sir. The Carrigall was lost with all hands, reducing our capital count to four--three Kol battleships including the Schuegraf and the Fraser. Our over-sized battlecruiser battlegroup is now an undersized one with the loss of Virgo, Kronus, Cancer, Greece, and Deneb. The Dunov suffered severe damage to her shield generators and anti-matter capacitors. She's still combat ready but only on standard reactors.."

The Lieutenant paused for a few moments before continuing. "Heavy Cruiser Squadron 657 and 435 have been lost, including the command cruiser. However, CruRon 414 and 512 are undamaged. Both squadrons of light carriers are unharmed, Captain! We've lost three fighter squadrons worth of craft, but our bomber squadrons are intact since they were never launched. According to last report, Commodore Cruze was attempting to reorganize the fighter squadrons."

Focker let out a soft sigh. "Unfortunately, sir, our screening elements were hit hard. All three scout frigate squadrons were lost--we think the Visari bombers were intentionally aiming for them to prevent us from stripping them out and sending them for reinforcements. None of our light frigates were destroyed, but once our LRMs opened fire, the Visari hit them hard. We're down to two squadrons of the Javelis ships, and two Garda squadrons."

Forscythe appeared calm as he tallied up the losses. One Kol battleship, five battlecruisers with another possible damaged beyond combat ability, ten heavy cruisers as well as their two command ships, eighteen scout frigates, and twenty four LRMs. Those fifty ships had cost the task force over twenty four thousand dead. Forscythe's squadron coherency was shot except in those rare cases that entire groups of ships were destroyed instead of one taken from squadron A and another from B.

"Anna, tell damage control to give top priority to shield generator repair and clearing the circuit to Beam Three. They can put it in manual if they must, but we're going to need it when we exit phase space. Andrew, what's the status on the Vasari Task Force?"

The Lieutenant continued without breaking a beat. "There are four Devastator class battleships and two Desolator class dreadnoughts. Our LRMs managed to destroy one of their Maurader class battlecruisers and we believe one was too damaged to continue. At the time of our phase out, it had not fired for two minutes. Their heavy cruiser squadrons are intact, but our LRMs traded missiles favorably to their Assailant heavy frigates and the Sentinel class defense frigates. We estimate that they only have two squadrons of the Sentinels and three of the Assailants. Unfortunately, their entire light frigate strength is intact at eight squadrons."

Forscythe remained thoughtful for a moment. Even without their technological advantage, the Vasari outnumbered TF3 and outmassed it around 3:2. With their tech advantage, Forscythe faced almost twice his own firepower.

Forscythe queued his pad. He knew of the system they were headed to but none of the details. Hmmm, a desert planet by the name of Hades. Not the most hopeful of names, and it was a neutral system which pocketed the Eastern Reaches, too stubborn or too far to accept Trade Order invitation or TEC might. Still, it was a poor system and they might slow the Vasari down. They would at least leave the task force alone, especially with an alien fleet inhabiting the system. At best, they would have enough forces to even the odds.

"Alright, Focker. Anna, you and the Lieutenant grab Beau, Shannon, and Jerome and meet me in the conference room. Let's brainstorm a few options for what's left of the fleet."

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Neither the TEC Task Force nor the Vasari fleet, despite their more advanced technology, detected the nimble little craft under strict emissions control during their pitched battle, and by the time they reached a point where they could detect such a miniscule phase out with explosions and ECM playing havoc with their systems, no trace of the ship remained.

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Reply #176 Top

or a massive black hole rapidly expanding from the galactic centre (the one hypothesised by some astrophysicists).
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i doubt it... makes for a terrible plot

Reply #177 Top

a massive black hole rapidly expanding from the galactic centre (the one hypothesised by some astrophysicists).

i doubt it... it makes for a terrible plot

Reply #178 Top

Quoting eoncommander, reply 22
the TEC is not having their ass handed to them.  they won this battle.

and about those care bears... http://xkcd.com/146/

haha :)

Reply #180 Top

Quoting noobsauce94, reply 4
I bet it was Idlebot...

oh dont bring idlebot here it probably created by ironclad games just to see our reactions.

Oh and I bet its is the Shana Rei the legendary "creatures of darkness." That from Saga of the Seven Suns where they devour every bit of light and cant see a single thing literaly have your soul sucked out of you, there that deadly. Once you are in there shroud, there is no way to escape.

Reply #181 Top

great work

Reply #182 Top

C**p, I almost forgot to congratulate WitchFire. The book is fantastic, but you should use a less in-game context, such as where Anna gives her status report; Instead of putting "the ability of the Vasari missiles to bypass our shields a certain percentage of the time", try putting "occasional shield penetration by Vasari missiles". You should try a spelling check after that to correct the mistakes you made; but otherwise, great job!:thumbsup:

It's better than Peter Hamiltons books, by far... |-O

P.S. it may well have been a black hole, actually. If you know the hypothesis, it states that the gravity of a massive black hole keeps the material in a galaxy together, and prevents it from floating off into empty space. The gravity of the black hole also inducts a centrifugal force on a galactic scale, making the material spin. A massive black hole is the only viable explanation that we have for this behaviour.:rolleyes:

Reply #183 Top

A serious suggestion: Surely, no amount of physical force could defeat the Dark Armada, right? Care-bears could beat the Vasari, because the core worlds population would fall for their cuddly softness.:pout:   They'd play with the bears for ages, until they become super killer transformers}:)   when The All-Spark spreads its energy throughout the core worlds. You'll know what I mean if you've watched the 'Transformers' film.

Reply #184 Top

Besides, where did the Cube come from? Optimus Prime mentioned a possible origin during the opening scene, when the Cube was floating through space and colliding with asteroids before flying into Earth.

Reply #185 Top

The cybermen deleted the Dark Armada.

Delete delete delete delete.

 

:cylon:  

Reply #186 Top

No! It was the Daleks! Davros has returned, and he's invading Germany, for some reason!

"Exterminieren! Exterminieren! Halt! Sonst werden wir sie Exterminieren! Sie sind jetzt ein Gefangener der Daleks! " :borg:

Not that I have anything against Germans.

Reply #187 Top

Sooo its been today, and its been tomorrow. Still no update :'(

Reply #188 Top

Quoting The_Undying, reply 9
Besides, where did the Cube come from? Optimus Prime mentioned a possible origin during the opening scene, when the Cube was floating through space and colliding with asteroids before flying into Earth.

The all spark came from the transformers home world (left or sent away or whatever during the war)

Reply #189 Top

Autobot Matrix of Leadership>All-spark.  Considering the lore than what makes transformers what they are is their 'spark', the All-spark could be akin to their primordial ooze, but considering their non-organic nature, I suppose they can't just boink to procreate their species.

Though when Galvatron makes his inevitable appearance in the movies, I do hope that Leonard Nimoy voices him again.  The 1986 movie rocks the socks.  Except for that token pain in the ass human.  PREPARE FOR EXTERMINATION!  Their defenses are broken; let the slaughter begin!

And then there's the look on that one decepticon on the reflection of Prime's grill... *coughs* I had a cool uncle who used to babysit me a lot. >.>

As for the update, it's coming, but considering the, erm, enormity of what I want to do, it's taking a bit longer.  Just to put it in perspective, this update will end immediately following the opening cinematic.

 

EDIT: Also, the Cube is probably a relic of the Quintessans, who created both the autobots and decepticons, who then promptly turned on their masters and whupped them good.

Reply #190 Top

Quoting WitchFire, reply 14

As for the update, it's coming, but considering the, erm, enormity of what I want to do, it's taking a bit longer.  Just to put it in perspective, this update will end immediately following the opening cinematic.
Wait, what?

Reply #191 Top

The cube mystery is solved... wait, wtf? Quintessans??

We should go back to the topic, but who cares. Let's talk about upates and Transfomers and such e.g. I think that Soundwave will transform into a soundwave (not a typo) in the next film.

Reply #192 Top

what would Care-Bears transform into????

Reply #193 Top

what would Care-Bears transform into????

either:

A ) Gargantuan robotic spider-thingys that spew fire ,Gamma rays, and blood out of thousand of portholes on it's back, launching Nuclear missiles from it's "Abdomen"

B ) Chuck Norris...

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Reply #194 Top

wens the next part of this story coming out?

Reply #195 Top

I would be one very happy camper if I knew...

[Sigh]

No pressure though, WitchFire. Take your time in order to write the awesome stories we have grown to love!

Reply #196 Top

What I have read so far is really good. Read any David Webber by any chance? This writting reminds me of his The Stars at War series.

Reply #197 Top

btw, found the story section.  from the board "sins of a solar empire" go to the very bottom, and fan submission is right there.

Reply #198 Top

Hey I always enjoy good fan fiction and I like your writing style. Nice work.

Reply #199 Top

B ) Chuck Norris...

Whay Chuck Norris?

p.s. have you heard the rumour about Chick Norris's Beard? It's believed that beneath it is not a chin, but just another fist.

Reply #200 Top

This is completely irrelevant, but what does everyone think of this planet? (Which I named Earth) It's the capital of the USS (my in-game name) and (obviously) home of mankind. It's only got one Point Defense to defend it, but the neighbouring asteroid of Rochar (also shown below) is massively fortified because it's on the bridge between Earth and the rest of my map.