underwater love

*WARNING: DIRTY, DIRTY WORDS ! ... please don't read if easily offended. thankyou* :)

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he’s always liked eating me. maybe even more than he likes fucking me.

and it can never be slow enough for him. he can never take long enough. with me prone this way his power has endless potential. it is only when i touch him that he becomes what he is.

he likes to look at me. likes to do what he wants to do to me at his leisure. likes to store up images for when he feels even more alone than he does when he’s with me.

i like to kiss his neck ‘til i taste blood and then watch him fight with the mess of lust and reality that forms his confusing choice of which entity to let me leave my mark on this time.

i like to fuck him. he knows it. and his facination with my cunt gets me off. he can’t take his eyes off the damned thing. “you...” he would moan, his mouth clogged with my juices “... are so perfect, so beautiful”.

when i tell him “women’s lips are a mirror image of ...” he stops. kisses my mouth. kisses my cunt. kisses my mouth again. tells me “you’re right”.

i uncross my legs. immediately his gaze drops but i like it too much to feign annoyance. he watches my fingers. my hands. anything i put near my cunt. into my cunt. anything. anything at all.

i like the power of possessing such a trap. the word vagina needs to be amended, in his humble opinion. trap is better, he thinks. sometimes i need to crawl away, curl up, oversensitised. overcome. overloved.

he is trapped. he’s drowning down there or something. he once spent an entire night sleeping with his lips against hers. so i don’t think i’ll ever really love him as much as she does. and with good reason.

he likes me to back up onto him as if she were alive. he makes me pause, though, on the way, my knees against the hard floor, and i'd hate it if i couldn’t hear his ragged breathing and didn’t know what was coming.

his hands encircle my waist and i still half wonder who he’s talking to as he fucks me ... “you’re so beautiful, oh, you are ... you’re the most beautiful cunt in the world”.


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Reply #2 Top
Hot, hot, hot, hot, hot... !


oh, thankyou so much cosmos77


P.S. Mignuna???


do you mean my screen name ?. i'm australian, my name is actually vanessa. mignuna means 'the lady is crazy' in maltese and was given to me by a freind.

welcome, and thanks for your comment


vanessa/mig XX
Reply #3 Top
The Lady is Crazy ehhh?

I hope (... for your sake anyways!) you're writing from experience!

I look forward to reading more of your writing!

Cosmos!

P.S. I'm an Aussie too...
Reply #4 Top
wow.  what else can i say?  hot like molten metal
Reply #5 Top
Phew! *heart racing*

I need to get laid. That was some brilliant writing migs.

Suz xxx
Reply #7 Top
Wow Mig, just wow.....and what Suz said
Reply #8 Top
I look forward to reading more of your writing!


thankyou very much, cosmos. nice to 'meet' you

P.S. I'm an Aussie too


there are quite a few of us on here nowadays, cosmos. welcome to ju



wow. what else can i say? hot like molten metal


oh, high praise indeed. thankyou, kingbee. thankyou so much



I need to get laid. That was some brilliant writing migs


oh, bless your little cotton socks, suz, you're a such a treasure !!!!



What Suz said!!


oh, thanks dyl. glad you found it. hope you're inspired



Wow Mig, just wow.....and what Suz said


awww, thankyou so much, sal. (now go to your room for reading that !. mumsy XX)


THANKYOU EVERBODY SO MUCH


vanessa/mig XX
Reply #9 Top
hehe welcome Mig, but inspired to what?? Write my own? that could get very messy. I'm really no good with the erotic!!

Dyl xx
Reply #10 Top
but inspired to what?? Write my own?


yes, treasure. or perform one !!!. as you wish !

that could get very messy. I'm really no good with the erotic!!


oh, what's a little mess between friends, dyl ?


vanessa XX
Reply #11 Top

what's a little mess between friends


mmmmmmmmhmmmmmmmm

Reply #13 Top

Hmm it certainly might be fun to watch...


Reply #14 Top
Very, very nice!

For some reason my writing has always drifted that direction whenever my husband has been away (training, TDY).
Reply #15 Top
*sigh*

I hate being single. Thanks a lot, mignuna! Now I feel like shit >8P

Seriously though, that was very enjoyable, now I'm out of here before someone at work sees me reading it >8).
Reply #16 Top
I think you need to change your WARNING label a bit.... there's nothing offensive about this article: it's very startling in its honesty and freedom.
Nic.
Reply #17 Top

there's nothing offensive about this article


couldnt agree more...very insightful observation.

Reply #18 Top
what's a little mess between friends ?>mmmmmmmmhmmmmmmmm


i take it you too approve of friendly messes, kingbee ?


Hmm it certainly might be fun to watch


dyl ! lol. it would. it would ! tee hee


Very, very nice!


thankyou so much, lady cleve

For some reason my writing has always drifted that direction whenever my husband has been away (training, TDY).


tee hee. i think it happens when i ovulate or something !!! lol. thanks for your comment, lady cleave. it made me smile.


I hate being single. Thanks a lot, mignuna! Now I feel like shit >8P


hi, lord shitzu. i am sorry that you feel like shit. lol. i can always write another one ?

Seriously though, that was very enjoyable, now I'm out of here before someone at work sees me reading it >8).


thankyou, i'm very glad you did. thanks for stopping by, lord shitzu


I think you need to change your WARNING label a bit.... there's nothing offensive about this article: it's very startling in its honesty and freedom. Nic.


oh, nic. thankyou so much !. i am honoured to have received this comment from you. i am so pleased you read this, and i'm very glad you found it honest and free. that was my intention.


"there's nothing offensive about this article" ...couldnt agree more...very insightful observation.


aww shucks, kingbee. thanks, treasure


vanessa/mig XX