A TEC Story

Ah, here we are, the beginnings of a TEC themed story. Criticism and comments would be greatly appreciated!

"Admiral, the people on the fringe worlds of trader space don’t have the time to wait for your fleet to assemble!" chided the administrator of Sector 958Z to Admiral Dimitri Voskov. "You need to get your ships on the move and out there, now!" he said.
Voskov was irritated by the stupidity of this man. How did such arrogant, rash, indignant fools rise to the top of an empire that reserved its elite positions to typically intelligent and successful individuals who were cunning and charismatic enough to use trade and negotiation to attain their power? No matter what he thought of the administrator, he had little choice in the matter. The TEC had ordered Voskov’s fleet to the sector little less than a month ago with a communiqué that sounded nothing short of desperate. The situation with the aliens on the old front was worsening daily, and for this reason Voskov’s damaged and battle weary strike group was to be drawn up for service again. Under his command he had a formidable force of three ‘Sova’ class carriers, two ‘Kol’ class battleships and his flagship, "Righteous", a ‘Marza’ class dreadnought, as well as an impressive number of support frigates and cruisers. Though he was confident with the size and firepower of his force, Voskov was more concerned with his crews. They had been whittled down by nearly a year’s tour of the old front against the aliens called the Vasari.
Constant battles had taken the toll on the crews, leaving strong willed veterans amongst green recruits who feared merely the sight of the enemy. The grizzliest veterans belonged to the strike craft, the fighters and bombers, of the ‘Sova’ class carriers. These soldiers had seen it all, and had witnessed countless hundreds of men perish in the cockpits of tiny fighters that were vulnerable to any type of weapons fire. Though he was concerned about their state of mind, he was pleased to think of how potent these veterans were when swung into action.
The strike craft made up a huge portion of the fleet’s strategy. Unlike other TEC admirals, who maneuvered their fleets in close to concentrate their firepower on a single target, Voskov preferred to use a fairly indirect approach to attacking his enemy. He launched strike craft from his immense and well outfitted carrier force and used them to whittle away the shields and armor of a tactically important capital ship in the enemy fleet. Though each engagement the pilots sustained heavy losses, the loss of that capital ship either by withdrawal from the battle or by destruction had been enough to turn the tide of the battle for the TEC forces.
The admiral was in no hurry to return to battle, and he knew his crews weren’t either. His reply was delivered quickly and was to the point, "Administrator, I intend to mobilize my fleet within the next seven days, and I feel that that is with all the speed in the galaxy. I cannot properly move this force to action in any less time, and I should fully hope you don’t wish to see this fleet return in shambles within days instead of within months."
A red faced administrator replied, "For seven days spent here you have sealed the fates of six hundred million people – you’ve condemned them to death!"
Voskov replied apathetically, "Six hundred million is nothing compared to the butchering that will happen if our fleets are rendered inoperable due to incompetence and impatience. There is a point where I beg you to exercise sound judgment and to have patience with my approach, and this is it." The administrator was furious, but dismissed Voskov with his permission for an additional seven day re-supply in 958Z.
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Wow. Unlike 99.999% of any kind of fan fiction (yes, you who is reading this, your story fucking blew), this is actually somewhat decent. The writing is a little rambly and meandering, but it sure beats the hell out of anything else anyone has written.
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I'm glad it didn't blow, I'll write up a second portion (and perhaps daily additions) to it sometime when I have some more sleep - and probably after a sins game.
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One thing is double space between paragraphs.
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Do we have a running Fanfic story thats more then decent? This is pretty good and i know shit like this take FOREVER. I wonder ...
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Setting up a little more, it'll get more fun the next time I post:

The ships tumbled through the phase lane into the space of Vulcan IV, a forbidding world named after the Roman god of fire and volcanoes. On board the Righteous, Admiral Voskov was setting his plan into motion. On the main screen he was bombarded by a mass of fleet icons representing his own, and that of a Vasari battle group on the other side of the gravity well.

In the usual fashion, he had set out a scout vessel earlier to chart the enemy fleet’s composition. The Vasari were well outfitted with two impressively large battleships, a carrier-like vessel, and a huge capital ship that Voskov had never heard of or seen before.

Quickly and adeptly, Voskov made his battle decisions. He told his communications officer to broadcast a transmission to his fleet, “Vasari spotted, 20,000 kilometers out, Genesis, Cerberus and Myrmidon are to move within 600 kilometers of orbit, Defiance, Righteous, and Gallant are to take supporting strike groups to the left edge of the gravity well. Further communications will be established when combat positions are taken.”

He was confident in the overwhelming size of his fleet, but he was not about to take chances fighting against this massive capital ship. His plan was cautious. By positioning the main strike ships on the outer lip of the gravity well in an attempt to lure the Vasari to them first, he could assure that his strike craft not only had somewhat of an element of surprise, but also that they would have a clear lane to strike.

The Vasari that he had fought previously had almost always brought their capital ships to close range combat positions before their support craft could catch up, sometimes leading to huge gaps in their defenses. He was hoping that the apparent weakness of his front-line capital ships would be enough to foolishly lure the Vasari commander into the same trap.

After seven days of re-supply, rest, and repair, the crews and ships were in good condition. So confident was Voskov that his men were ready, that he had taken them here to Vulcan IV, a strategically located outer world which he fully expected to be attacked. He was, however, surprised to see that the Vasari had moved in so quickly. Whatever was happening, he figured they must be taking a beating across all fronts and felt the need to expand as rapidly as possible in the absence of opposition. They had found some opposition now, and Voskov was committed to ensuring this would be the last engagement they won for quite some time.

His communications officer turned to him with a message from the carrier group, “Admiral, the Genesis, Cerberus, and Myrmidon are in position and awaiting further orders.”

“Good,” Voskov thought aloud. These carriers would certainly surprise the Vasari as they were attacked by wave after wave of strike craft for which their heavily armed and armored capital ships were not equipped to deal with. The Righteous and accompanying craft were almost in position themselves, and were sure to be beckoning the Vasari to a fight. Satisfied that they were in position, he ordered his officer to send out another fleet-wide transmission, “Positions set, all ships, if you have not already, sound general quarters, Righteous out.”
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This is a little old, but I think I'll add it to my list aswell.
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On the carrier Genesis, a member of Voskov’s armada, the ships lights flickered red and danced off the wall to the accompanying alarm. “Attention all hands, fighter pilots are to be on the hangar deck in 30 seconds, repeat all fighter pilots to the hangar deck,” sounded the voice that Lieutenant Max Baer was so accustomed to hearing when a scramble was called.

The call to general quarters and for pilots to scramble was no surprise him, and he had already begun to don his flight suit when the alarm was called. He bolted from his berth and headed to the main hangar deck where hundreds of other pilots were in the same situation – still putting on their flight suits and getting ready to launch. The hangar system was just now brining the first fighter craft onto the deck – the fighters of the squadron leaders were always first up. The carrier was designed to quickly launch and service strike craft by taking them from remote bays where carrier crews worked endlessly to rearm, refuel, and repair them to the hangar deck. Baer spotted his craft with its tail marking of TF-185 quite obviously showing.

He ran over and clambered into the cockpit, and brought the canopy down over top of him. As soon as he had thrown on his helmet, the HUD was displayed where he was accustomed to seeing it, and he felt the pull of the catapult as it shoved him into the airlock. Then of course, the door in front of him opened, and he relaxed as the ship’s catapult threw him effortlessly into space. At least a hundred other pilots exited the ship’s numerous launch bays at the same time he did. In the distance the glint of weapons fire could be seen as the TEC fleet had begun to fight with the Vasari battle group. He had begun to fire the thrusters in a quick check to see if anything that the techs had missed was malfunctioning, and then started on a forward course to the assembly zone some two kilometers away from the carrier.

Shortly after reaching the assembly zone his comrades rallied around him. In the typical TEC wedge formation they started to move towards the battle zone with orders to engage any Vasari fighters. Typically the TEC fighter squadrons had been forcing the Vasari fighters to engage them long before the bombers were launched, leaving a clear path to the Vasari capital ships and supporting fleet.

Before long, Baer spotted incoming Vasari fighters. Oddly enough, it appeared that their formation was made vertically as opposed to the horizontal layout that the TEC used with their formations. He looked about and to his right he saw an entire TEC wedge driven apart and destroyed by Vasari fighters swooping in from under and above the formation, taking advantage of the less veteran squadron leaders. Baer quickly decided that this Vasari formation was not going to have that same luxury. He barked off some instructions to the rear part of the wedge, “ Ackerman, Stevenson, these bastards are going to come above and below. Ackerman, you’ll take your wingman and go low, Stevenson make sure they don’t get over top.” Following acknowledgements, he reminded the rest of the formation to quickly break after the first pass, and then in a mere second his finger was on the trigger letting a short burst of his auto-cannons fly towards the oncoming Vasari fighters.

Ackerman and Stevenson did as they were told, and consequently the Vasari pilots were surprised. The two quickly broke off and into their respective directions, twisting and turning to get onto the six o’ clock of the Vasari fighters. The rookie pilots in those space craft had wagered their entire success on green TEC squadron leaders not noticing their plans, and were almost immediately killed by Ackerman and Stevenson and their wingmen. The rest of the formation was now locked in a bitter dogfight with the remaining Vasari group. Baer had no time to pay attention to his comrades as he worked to line up a burst on the Vasari fighter in front of him.

The TEC craft were nimble, but the Vasari craft were fast and had a slimmer profile, making them harder to hit. He worked the Vasari pilot, constantly maneuvering to line the shot up, but to no avail. Finally Baer lost his target as it managed to break away from his maneuvering and turned the tide on him. Baer was not one to be easily beaten, as the Vasari pilot came on what he thought was going to be a clean run on Baer’s right side, Baer utilized one of the strengths of TEC fighter craft and quickly fired thrusters to turn and face the approaching Vasari craft.

He let loose a ruthless burst of auto-cannon fire and fired the forward thrusters just in time to escape the blast debris. He looked quickly around him only to find all a mess of TEC and Vasari fighters in a cycle of desperate struggles to overtake one another. Quickly he found Ackerman fighting off one, and took to the foe.

Between the two of them, the Vasari pilot had little chance. As the Vasari pilot would try to make a run on Ackerman, Baer would intercept him and try to catch him in a burst. Eventually, Baer’s efforts and patience paid off as the Vasari craft burst into pieces. The cycle continued for nearly an hour, and after he had scored eight kills and the Vasari fighter force was nearly vaporized, Baer was finally comfortable and calm again.

For one second, he had let his guard down and it was a mistake. Out of the corner of his eye he saw a Vasari fighter line up a burst on him, and prepared to die in space. Just as he had said his last prayers, the fighter exploded into hundreds of pieces and Stevenson’s fighter shot past his starboard side, with a quick salute from Stevenson accompanying the destruction of the enemy fighter.

Baer radioed off to him, “Tell you what, I’m glad I fly with a bunch of crazy bastards like you, otherwise I’d have been dead a long time ago! You still owe me a few more, though.”

Stevenson shot back, “I dunno lieutenant, looks to me like you owe me now, that counts for two - one because I saved your ass, the other because you were half asleep in the middle of the galaxy’s best entertainment.”

Baer chuckled, but didn’t respond. Although he was lucky, two of the rookies assigned to their wing had been killed and he knew hundreds more hand died in the dogfight. He saw the bombers lining up to make their runs on the Vasari ships and knew that within a few hours, all of this mess would be over. He ordered his wedge formation to regroup and begin their patrol cycle around the TEC fleet, which at this point was just now seizing the upper hand.
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He let loose a ruthless burst of auto-cannon fire and fired the forward thrusters just in time to escape the blast debris. He looked quickly around him only to find all a mess of TEC and Vasari fighters in a cycle of desperate struggles to overtake one another. Quickly he found Ackerman fighting off one, and took to the foe.

Between the two of them, the Vasari pilot had little chance. As the Vasari pilot would try to make a run on Ackerman, Baer would intercept him and try to catch him in a burst. Eventually, Baer’s efforts and patience paid off as the Vasari craft burst into pieces. The cycle continued for nearly an hour, and after he had scored eight kills and the Vasari fighter force was nearly vaporized, Baer was finally comfortable and calm again.

For one second, he had let his guard down and it was a mistake. Out of the corner of his eye he saw a Vasari fighter line up a burst on him, and prepared to die in space. Just as he had said his last prayers, the fighter exploded into hundreds of pieces and Stevenson’s fighter shot past his starboard side, with a quick salute from Stevenson accompanying the destruction of the enemy fighter.

Baer radioed off to him, “Tell you what, I’m glad I fly with a bunch of crazy bastards like you, otherwise I’d have been dead a long time ago! You still owe me a few more, though.”

Stevenson shot back, “I dunno lieutenant, looks to me like you owe me now, that counts for two - one because I saved your ass, the other because you were half asleep in the middle of the galaxy’s best entertainment.”

Baer chuckled, but didn’t respond. Although he was lucky, two of the rookies assigned to their wing had been killed and he knew hundreds more hand died in the dogfight. He saw the bombers lining up to make their runs on the Vasari ships and knew that within a few hours, all of this mess would be over. He ordered his wedge formation to regroup and begin their patrol cycle around the TEC fleet, which at this point was just now seizing the upper hand.

Yep heard of Voskov. A shrewd General to most, but a little docile for my taste.  Definitely known for having some of the best fighter pilots in the TEC though.  And now i see why. Thnx for sharing the Captains logs.
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