The Other Shoe

This is a really a short story, as opposed to an AAR that describes the progress of a full game. I wrote part of it over a year ago, then banged away at it periodically and finally came up with something worth posting last week. It's based on an early sandbox game; it was a huge galaxy, and by year four, the Iconians' influence area was rapidly taking over the whole map.

I had one planet on the edge of their space that was in and out of influence trouble for the last year of the game before I got to tech victory. Watching that planet's vacillations got me thinking about just how one technologically advanced society might try to go about subverting another society from within.

I decided to explore the problem from the point of view of one of my planet's residents rather than a more remote perspective. Here's the first part. I'll add more as I get a chance to edit it.

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The Other Shoe


The culvert was freezing and it stank, but Rain needed a quiet place to hole up and wait for the story to break. He leaned against the filthy plastumen wall and worked to get his breathing under control. He closed his eyes and concentrated on the feel of sweat freezing to the back of his neck. It had been too close, and probably for nothing.

The Nosers would spend hours tearing up Humie Slums before they started looking for him in the Bruise. He didn't think they would go after his parents; the Nosers weren't powerful enough to challenge SciSphere, even contractors like ma and da. His friends would get the worst of it, though, especially since he hadn't let them in on the details of the plan.

Once they saw it in the trivvy, he was sure they would forgive him, even if it was from Intensive Care. Rain knew that if he were extremely lucky, he would end up in IC as well. If he wasn't lucky, his folks would wake up a few days from now and find his shoes on the doorstep. Like Zuri's family had, except it had been his three-year-old daughter who made the discovery.

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The day after they found the shoes, the U reqested that Rain take a week off after his Betas negged out his whole lab. He spent part of the afternoon wandering the mallways, but it seemed like every single shop featured more and more of the slick, nasty Iconian goods that had come into fashion in the past year. He had just turned toward the center of the corridor to avoid setting off a SmartRack when he saw the jeweler's cart. On the side facing him, a Noser sigtag flashed proudly above a display of danglies.

He ran straight for the stairwell and didn't stop until he was topside. Just two months before, showing that sig had been a fineable offense. Now it was a Cultural Expression. He spat into the fine orange dust and shivered. TempCon didn't fully extend to this sector; for now, this was really just an emergency exit. One day, open-air mallage would probably occupy most of the valley. Would it sell anything from Earth? Or would all of the Terran-descended shoppers go grayskin and wear Ico drabs?

Da shrugged off the whole culture war as just a normal youth rebellion. "Wait'll they have to get jobs," he had said more than once, "That'll end their speeches and rallies and all the rest of it." He was a pico designer at MiniTec, and was full of retarded old jokes like "I always feel like I'm being micromanaged." His favorite line at social gatherings was "Did you know that MiniTec has gone down to a three-point-three hour workday? It's true, we really CAN miniaturize anything!"

When he brought up Iconian issues with ma, she just gave him her spooky little smile and said, "We all have so much to look forward to. Don't let this stuff get to you." Rain rolled his eyes. "You wish you could tell us more about your work, but if you did, you'd have to kill us, right, ma?"

Ma frowned briefly. "Yes. I would." She brightened again. "But even if I told you everything I know about epihelices and transtheta, and even if you could understand all of it, it's such a small part of The Project that it wouldn't be worth dying for." She placed her hand on the side of his face the way she had since he was a toddler and gave him a real smile. "Your father would probably tell you that these Iconian fashions are just... small potatoes." Then she laughed, and Rain sighed. He loved his parents, but they were hopeless.

Heading back to the dorms after hiking to another exit tower, Rain took a shortcut through the cans. Six giant cylinders had dropped from the first colony transport and landed in a cluster here. Fully automated, they dug out living space for the first colonists and set up autofactories and atmosphere exchangers. Compared to later stages of building, this original habitat was a dump.

Every section except Manufacturing had moved out of the cans as soon as possible. Most of the SciSphere techs and the higher-ups from other sections settled in Rain's subdiv, Hubie Syms. It was fairly exclusive, and it was the only sector that hadn't really gotten the Iconian craze. The Nosers (they called themselves the Grayshirts) and other Ico-fanatics had taken to calling it Humie Slums, and some out-of-work Nosers began hanging around the entrances and surface parks to harrass non-confs.

The cans also had the freight terminal, and it was the first place offworld goods landed after LOPo inspection. It was here that the whole Iconian craze had started. During their last expansion, Ico freighters had saturated the whole system with their goods, all sold at bargain basement "friendship pricings". Knockoffs of their famous designers' weird fashions, cheap trivvy sets, cheaper toys, and cubes and cubes of junk software. Their advatars used to res up all grainy and say things like "You buy two softwares, get three for free, okay, mister? How about four? Take one now, you pay me later, how you beat that kind of dealings?!"

Soon after these things showed up in the markets, every digimed on the planet that wasn't on SecurNet was littered with buggy software and infested with Workspace Iconians; stupid talking icons that only a system wipe could completely erase. But to Rain and most of his friends, the absolute worst thing to come out of the "Iconian invasion" was the danglies.

Designed to mimic the small appendages at the end of an Iconian's snout, these pseudoorganic "jewelries" actually self-grafted into the skin around the wearer's nostrils. They seemed to have a life of their own, sometimes pressing themselves to the face, sometimes turning and waving slowly about. When they were first introduced, people were disgusted with the whole idea. Nobody was buying them, and the advertising image of the smiling man and woman with their danglies (Idasix was their actual Iconian brand name) became a big joke.

Then one day some wag hacked the Idasix advatar node and replaced the bland advertising text with a version of the ancient joke; "All your face are belong to us!" It immediately went live to the whole planet, and people went apeshit. It seemed like overnight, half of the youth population and many adults, too, had gotten danglies. "Out of Stock" signs went up in store after store as they sold out everywhere.

Rain had been eighteen at the time. He had indulged in a few fads before, but the more he heard and read about the danglies, the more disturbed he became. For instance, after a certain attunement period, some people learned to control the things' motions, and a few could even make theirs change colors. Naturally, these folks were practically worshipped by other wearers. They could be used to absorb stimulants and intoxicants in gaseous form, and there were rumored to be clubs where they were used in other ways.

The bottom line for most Humie Slums residents was the fact that danglies were prohibited in SciSphere facilities, including the university labs. For Rain, the fact that they looked stupid was right up there, along with his conviction that they made wearers act stupid. His last girlfriend, Magnolia, had showed up in his dorm one day, her nose bright red and swollen from the graft.

"I know you don't like them, Rain, but come on, it's fun! You should try it! It still kind of hurts, but they feel amazing at the same time." Rain was silent, his mouth hanging open. Magnolia continued, "I can feel things with them already, you know? Like currents moving in the air and stuff. And I think..." she began to tear up a little. "I think I'm communicating with them already! Rain, I really feel that they are saying something to me!"

That broke the spell. Rain lowered his head so he wouldn't have to look at her face. "Well, Maggie, they're definitely saying something to everybody else."

"Really?" Rain looked up. Her oblivious delight made him a little sick. "What do you think they say?"

"They say, LOOK AT ME I'M A FRAKTARDED MORON!" There had been more, but it didn't matter. She had a huge row with her family, too, and switched her focus to AgTec the next day because they didn't forbid danglies. He hadn't seen her since. That was before groups of Nosers started roaming around together and hassling others. Some of those groups were made up of students who'd gotten danglies and then dropped out of the university.

For safety, Rain, Missouri, and other "untainted" (their term) students also took to going out in groups, but they did their best to avoid confrontation. Like most things, that worked until it didn't. Being jumped one time was enough to keep them out of most parts of the Infotainment Complex for good. Still, when the Noser muggings started in the surface parks, Rain and his friends were more than willing to go out and do what they could. Their studies suffered somewhat, but they carried their bruises as proudly as the Nosers wore their danglies.

Things went on that way for weeks - a fairly even exchange of taunts and fights where both sides ended up carrying people away. The thing that troubled the Humie Slummers most was the fact that Security seemed to tacitly ignore what was going on. Occasionally they would break up a big fight and arrest everyone for "public drunkenness", but they didn't usually show up until things were over. And then it was only to make sure that the med techs could do their job.

Security eventually decided to officially ban danglies from the force, but not before most of the patrol officers had gotten them. On top of that, union negotiators made sure that any officer who had danglies at the time of the ban - and all prospective officers who had gotten them before the ban or had gotten them offworld - would be protected by a grandfather clause.

Then, one day, Missouri stuck his head into Rain's room. "Hey, man, c'mon, we're setting up an ambush." Rain had his shoes on before he even asked where. "Spamburger and his Noser crew are planning to dump a bunch of chemicals in the lake tonight and turn it yellow. If we get there now we can get the jump on them. You got your snoopers?"

"Yeah. You know, being this far in advance, why don't we just tip off USec?"

Missouri squinted at Rain, his huge eyebrows moving together like two blond caterpillars trying to get it on. "Is that you, Rain? Did they get to you already and turn you yellow, too?"

"No, Zuri, I'm with you. I'm just sayin'."

Missouri rolled his eyes. "Be-CAUSE, if USec breaks it up, the entire school will be denied the privilege of seeing those frakkers chained naked to the roof of the boathouse, painted with their own yellow shit. That's why."

That was a good enough reason for Rain. Missouri had the whole thing planned out to the last detail. Spotters, lights, and noisemakers were quickly rigged in strategic spots and everyone was in place before dark. Missouri was in Rain's class, but he had done four in the Marines before coming back and starting as a freshman. He was a better fighter than he was a tactician, but everyone felt better and worked harder with him around. They even called themselves "Zuri's Furies", but Missouri was too modest to use the name himself.

Around 11:00, everything went straight to hell. Knowing what path the Nosers would have to take, they had concentrated on the approach and completely ignored the possibility that the Nosers might already be holed up in the boathouse. A noisemaker went off by the lake, followed by cursing. Someone hit the floods without warning, leaving only those with polarizing snoopers able to see. Unfortunately, this included Missouri, Rain, and Caracas - and all of the Nosers. Everyone started yelling and running around. Rain thought he was under cover until something hard bounced off his head. He rolled away, knocked someone else down, and tried to get up.

He was almost on his feet when he found himself on the ground again. Spamburger himself (nobody remembered his real name, he'd been a student for all of two months) was about to jump on him when Missouri came out of nowhere and flattened him. Spamburger recovered and actually managed to roll on top of Zuri. Rain surged to his feet to help his friend when someone else grabbed him around the waist. He was turned around and was in the act of kneeing his attacker's abdomen when he heard a high-pitched shriek. The shrieker turned out to be Spamburger. Rain watched him topple onto his back, hands covering his face. The shrieking continued, getting even louder.

Everything stopped except Spamburger's howling. Missouri stood up and dropped something small and red onto Spamburger's chest. He pointed at a group of Nosers who had been double-teaming Caracas and Yosemite and said "You. Come pick up this piece of shit and get him out of here. He just had himself an emergency dangliectomy. I see any of you pukes doing anything other than hauling this frakking carcass, I'm going to do the same frakking thing to you. Got that?" Blood dripped from his finger.

The other Nosers were too shocked to do anything other than what they were told. It took six of them to lift Spamburger, and by then he was thrashing. They ended up dragging him up the path and out of sight. The Furies were almost as shocked by the whole thing as the Nosers and barely got out of the area before the USec cars touched down.

For three days, there were no Noser attacks. None of the Furies left campus, either. A rumor went around that Spamburger had died. The next one said he was alive but in a coma, then there was one that had him turning into an Iconian. It turned out that he was hospitalized with massive swelling and a horrific infection in the stumps of his danglies. It was discovered that although the danglies integrate with your blood and nervous systems, they have no immune capacity whatsoever.

Four days after the lake incident, Missouri didn't show up for morning class. Nobody had seen him since the previous evening. Three days after that, his empty shoes turned up outside his front door. This is part of an old Iconian blood-feud ritual. It means that the owner won't be needing shoes any longer.

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Marshal,

You’ve set a high bar. Simply excellent.

Hydro
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Thanks for the compliment, HydroAC! I hope the rest of it measures up. The big problem with writing something short over such a long period of time is the inconsistencies that inevitably creep in. I think I've resolved all of them so far... Here's part 2.

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Rain moved closer to the culvert entrance and rolled up his sleeve, but there wasn't enough light yet to autores his derm. He flicked it and waited for the weird tingle it gives when it runs off your skin electricity. He'd set it to passive and text-only before starting out on his endeavor, so it was running in no time.

Rain pulled up the breaking news and business and political feeds, but there was nothing yet. Still too early. He turned the derm off again, and the ants stopped crawling down his arm. It wouldn't show up on the net in passive, but it could still be detected up to 100 meters when running. Too risky, especially if Rain's suspicions about Noser infiltration in ColSec were correct.

He moved back down the culvert and hunched against one wall to shiver and wait.

==

As he trudged through the cans the day after the shoes turned up, a large gray shipping container caught Rain's eye. There was nothing unusual about the container itself; it was just one of thousands of cylinders stacked up around the subtermini. Unlike the others, though, this one had two Nosers standing around near its door, doing a bad job of pretending to loaf. The Nosers had already made him, so there was no point in sticking around, but he made a note of the container's id and location.

The monoterminal adjoined the cans and was full of restaurants, shops, and public service areas. Rain found a vacant pubterm and dropped the extra cred for privacy and filters. He sat in the dim cube for a moment, trying to remember "uncle" Sheb's id.

Sheboygan "Sheb" Monroe was one of the original colonists and was one of a handful of highly-placed citizens who had organized to oppose the growing threat of Iconian "cultural poisoning" as they called it. There was no name for the organization; it had no official bank account and no army of thugs. Just a few "uncles" who could be called on or who might ask a favor.

Rain was certain that very soon there would be a need for a bank account, an army, and more, but right now he only had uncle Sheb. If you could call having the boss of the Teamsters Union on your side 'only.'

Rain quickly worked through the mnemonic and spoke three words aloud. "Connection Pending" came up, then began flashing. After a moment, a man's face appeared. "Afternoon, nephew," he said. "To what do I owe the pleasure?"

Rain's stomach slowly turned over and he started sweating. He'd never talked to or even seen any of the uncles before, never gotten invloved in anything more than a brawl. He knew he probably looked foolish, but tried to sound calm anyway. "Hi uncle," he started, thinking he must sound completely stupid.

He continued, "I don't know if it's really important, but I saw something unusual in the freight cavern today." The man raised an eyebrow, said nothing. "There's a freight cylinder near the monoterminal. It's..." (I am making this sound so lame) "kind of off by itself, and there are two guys who look like N... like they might be Grayshirts hanging around it." He paused, not sure what to say next. "I got its ID, if that would be helpful..."

The man in the screen relaxed his expression a bit. "It could be. Type it on your pad, please."

Had he been alone, Rain would have smacked himself in the head. Of course, type it in, idiot, he thought as he typed.

The man in the screen turned aside and did some typing of his own. He was silent for a while. Then he turned to face Rain in the monitor. "Said it's somewhere close to the monoterminal entrance?"

"Yes, that's right."

"Hm, well, that's not where it's supposed to be. Which means it was moved without union labor."

Rain wasn't sure what that meant. "Is that... important, uncle?"

The man in the screen smiled for the first time. "Oh, extremely important! We can't just have any random crew moving goods around in there. It violates all kinds of labor agreements. Yes, it will have to go back where it's supposed to be, Blue-M-3, and there will be some fines. Thanks for the tip, nephew." The man moved to sign off.

"Uh, sir..." The man paused, raised an eyebrow again. "If you don't mind my asking, what is in that container? I mean, what would be important enough for someone to try to move it on their own?"

The man shrugged. "Just a bunch of Ico electronics and trivvy cubes. LOPo went through it thoroughly, according to the manifest. Is there something else that you suspect? Sometimes a hunch is better than an inspection, you know."

Maybe the guy didn't think Rain was a total moron after all. He didn't have any real suspicions, but suddenly he wanted to get into that container, so he made one up. "Just rumors I've heard. About some kind of ramping-up campaign with the Grayshirts."

The man looked a little disappointed. "That's pretty vague. I also don't have any assets that I am ready to expose publicly for anything... Hm. Well, I..."

Rain had an idea and interrupted, "You might have to re-inspect after the container was moved without authorization, right, uncle?"

"Cursory. Just a brief scan to make sure the number of units and overall mass haven't changed. These things never take more than a few minutes."

"But..." Rain desperately wanted to get in there now. "If maybe the container lock, you know - accidentally wasn't locked after the inspection..."

The man smiled again. "Even if an inspector were forgetful, modern container doors are designed to close and lock automatically if left open or unlocked. Once they have done so, there is a brief warning period, and then they get a new lock code from the terminal to prevent tampering."

Rain was very disappointed. "And this container has one of those locks?"

"Yes," the man said, "This container is a prime example. Not even I could break in. Good afternoon, nephew." The connection was gone.

Rain sat for a moment in the dark cubicle. What could be so important about another crapload of Icoware? The Nosers must have wanted it badly to risk moving the thing themselves. He had to get in there soon. Should he get anyone else involved? What would he do if he did get in? Uncle had told him where the thing was going to be moved, and Rain hoped his remark about 'a prime example' was a clue to the code.

Rain wished he could be there to see the looks on the two goons' faces when the union came to break up their little party, but he needed some gear if he was going to get anything accomplished. He left the term without even glancing at the readout of his charges and headed for the dorms, wishing he hadn't been such a snob about Icoware. He didn't even know how to port into their platforms, much less what to do once he got in. That meant he'd have to get Yosemite involved, too, and pretty deeply.

==

Three hours gave Rain time to downchow, grab his rig, and take in a long lecture from Yosemite on Icoware protocols, logic, and basic hacking. At the end he gave Rain a little plastoid oval. "If you can't get in where you want, just hold this against the box and squeeze. It's a ripreader, and you can grab four or five system dupes on it, but don't set it off anywhere near your own gear or anything netted. Then bring it back and we can take a look. No, don't ask where I got it. And get me a jaundice, we may be up all night."

Wandering casually back into the cans from the monoterminal, Rain immediately saw the the container hadn't been moved. The two Nosers had called in reinforcements, but the ten of them were arguing with about fifty union members. The Nosers were yelling and gesticulating while the union guys stood around with arms folded, a lifter idling behind them. It was pretty obvious how it was going to turn out, so Rain walked past at a distance and headed back into the storage cavern.

By the time Rain found Blue-M, he thought he could hear the lifter powering up by the entrance. He slipped around the first row of containers, found a mid-grid ladder, and climbed up to level 3. He moved farther back on the catwalk and crouched down to wait.

The sound of the lifter came nearer, then the whine and squeal of the stensors as the container was jockeyed into position three rows deep in the stack. Fortunately, Rain was out of sight; he could hear the inspectors going about their business. They must have ridden on the lift. He could also hear someone climbing the ladder - that would be the Nosers, he guessed, and he moved further back.

The climbers arrived and started an argument that lasted until the inspectors were finished. Rain had crept around another container to try to see what was happening. One of the Nosers tried to shove into the container when the inspectors opened the door to leave. There was a scuffle, some blood flew and someone got thrown to the catwalk, then the lifter fields kicked in and dragged everyone out of there and down to ground level. Nobody had touched the door controls after the fight started.

Rain didn't know how long this window would last, so he got into a crouch and ran toward the container door. He got there just in time to see the relock warning expire, then the keypad started scrolling "...HLocked...See Terminal Supervisor...". He resisted the temptation to look down at the scene on the floor and studied the keypad.

It could display eleven characters at one time. He ran through the first few prime numbers in his head. The first eight numbers took twelve characters. Would the code chop 19 in half? Or is it a ten-digit code? Or more, or less? Rain hesitated, his finger hovering over the 2. What else had uncle said? "Not even I could break in." "Not even" - of course - 2 is the even prime. Quickly, before he could start to overthink it, Rain tapped in 35711131719.

Enough time passed for a bead of sweat to make it halfway down Rain's back before the keypad flashed "Access" and the door unsealed. He couldn't believe it - he was in! He shouldered through the door, shut it behind him and tripped the lock from the interior pad.

The keypad gave the only light inside the cylinder. Rain dug the torch out of his beltpack and quickly looked around. The cylinder was full of crates three deep on all sides, with a two-meter-wide open space in the center. The ceiling was about ten meters above him. Fortunately, the inspectors had thoughtfully left their ladder in place at the center.

The crates were stamped with hideous Iconian heiroglyphs, but the stanchions between them held the real data - contents, owner, manufacturer, destination, mass, crate access dates, etc. Access date was where Rain planned to start. Any crate that had been accessed since the container was shipped would be suspect, because LOPo almost never opened individual crates. He dug out his miniscanner and started scanning and climbing.

At the top, Rain glanced through the access dates. All of the crates had been opened several times since the cylinder was first loaded on its freighter, but not since it had arrived here. Had the Nosers already gotten out what they wanted? But what did they want? Rain initiated a pattern search of all of the container's data in his scanner. He looked all around while he waited for the results, but there was nothing to distinguish any of the crates.

The scanner flashed "Done." The list of anomalous data was almost as long as the raw list. The contents of this container came from all over Iconian space. It seemed like every crate came from a different manufacturer, had different contents, and went to different owners. Three of the crates had elevated mass indices, but they were supposed to contain heavy textiles, whereas the rest mostly carried lightweight electronics.

Rain was aware that any of the data he was looking at could have been tampered with, but he wasn't prepared to break into every crate. There had to be a clue in there somewhere. Perched at the top of the ladder, he entered filter after filter and scrolled through each dataset, but nothing stood out. This was going nowhere.

Rain was reaching to put the scanner back into his belt pack when he heard it. A small whining chirp somewhere between a sparrow and a mosquito. He knew that sound. And it was coming from his scanner.

Incredulous, Rain brought the scanner back out. At the bottom of the screen, a little 3-D cariacature of an Iconian stuck its head out and blinked. "Greetings Rain," it chirped, "What can I help you find today?" It cocked its gray head to one side and its deadblack eyes glittered in the torchlight.

Before it could say anything else, Rain turned off the scanner, not taking his eyes off of the dark screen. His instincts told him to autowipe the unit immediately, but he resisted. A Workspace Iconian. On his scanner. He knew it hadn't been there when he entered the container. It had to have boarded somewhere in here. And the system that initiated the board would still be hot even if it wasn't running.

Quickly, Rain dumped the scanner into his pack and brought out his finetooth. Da was really big on 'Bring Your Progeny to Work Day', so last year Rain had brought the instrument with him to MiniLabs and modded its macro setting to fifty meters. A slow, spiraling sweep caught a slightly warm patch in a fifth-tier crate. Something there was live and trying to mask itself by supercooling.

The crate was in the second row, so Rain had to crawl over the first one to reach it. He pulled out a couple of minijacks that he had liberated from da's desk that evening, jammed them into the crack between crate body and lid, and set them off. He was in almost immediately. There were several sealed boxes nested inside the crate. He used the finetooth to locate the ones that held running electronics, then snapped five of them at random with Yosemite's reader.

Closing the crate was a lot harder than opening it had been, but at last Rain felt the autoseal kick in. the crate would show as having been opened, but there was nothing he could do about that. He climbed back down to the floor, listened at the door for a moment, then opened it. Nobody was outside. He made sure to set the container lock himself so that he could get back in.

Rain thought he heard footsteps behind him as he made his way back out of the cans, but there was still plenty of early evening foot traffic in the monoterminal and he was sure he wasn't followed out of there. He got back to the U without a hitch, grabbed a liter of jaundice at the robo, and headed for Yosemite's dorm.

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Here is part 3. There will be either one or two more installments, depending on how well the rest of the story compresses.

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"Well." It was the first thing Yosemite had said in two hours. He turned around and grabbed a pretzel. "You turned it off, but only after the thing had spoken?" Rain nodded. "Yeah, it already gave all of your data to the system in that crate. Autowipe will look like it got rid of the thing, but it won't. Only thing it can't do is run with the power off. Next generation will probably be able to, though. If they need one."

"So whoever opens that crate will know exactly who I am." Rain didn't wait for Yosemite's answer. "What kind of sick shit is this?"

Yosemite shrugged. "I can't get to everything, even on these dupes. What I can see is pretty scary. I'm pretty sure one of their goals is to get SecurNet infected. That's gonna happen about half an hour after these things go live outside the container. It also spews out self-replicating Workspace Icos that will be impossible to wipe. I can't tell if there's anything actively malicious in their replicating codebase or if they're just a super annoyance to cover the real damage elsewhere."

They both thought about that for a minute. "How are these things going to be deployed? Sold as regular digimeds?" Rain asked.

"No, there's not even any faked-out ui code, it's straight attack. It's all geared toward acquiring target ware that moves into range - I don't think they're even going to be on the net. More likely concealed somewhere that a lot of SecurNet users pass, like a tube or a 'spensary."

"But those Icos are banned in the labs and lots of other places. Won't they be detected?"

"There's a time delay between infil and resup. How long were you in that container before you saw the thing?"

"Hm. Maybe twenty minutes. Is it a hard delay or variable? The inspectors took about a minute and a half, so so maybe it was set to go off after they'd been out of the container for a while."

"I don't think so - the machines only came online a minute or two before your scanner got infected. Don't know, but it doesn't matter. We have to shut that shit down. Or... Well, really, I guess you have to shut it down."

"What do you mean, me? I don't know Icolog."

I can help with that. What I'm saying is, they already know who you are." Yosemite waited a moment to let that sink all the way in. "I don't think the device is incom with anything outside the container, so we should be safe until the Nosers get their hands on the thing. But however this shakes out, they're going to know who busted into that crate tonight."

"We could go low tech and just blow up the crate or shred the devices, then they wouldn't know," Rain said, "but that's risky in lots of other ways and they'll just send more. There could already be more in other containers somewhere, for all we know. Or already in use."

"I think we'd know if they were already in use. But we've got to do something fast." Yosemite smiled and crunched another pretzel. "And I think I know just how to do it."

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Rain wobbled back toward the culvert entrance. His feet were numb with the cold and he had developed a leg cramp. The sun had started to come up, and there was enough light to power his derm this time.

Breaking news was all he needed to see. Rain smiled to himself as he read line after line of outraged commentary and reassuring nonsense from GovSphere. There was some Noser backlash, too, but all from the ranks. Their 'Cultural Moderators' or whatever they called themselves these days were strangely silent.

Rain picked a likely story. "Vid, color, downstream" he said. The story cut in to a shot of a sleek little digimed sitting on top of a public waste container. Its surface was literally crawling with 3-D Icos in the middle of a full-scale battle. Audio cut in to a woman's voice, probably belonging to the digimed's owner.

==

"There's no way we can get into the mission programming in these things," Yosemite was saying. "We can't change the fact that they're going to snoop out people's comps and infect them. There's a double-safe system that checks the whole thing continuously, and a fullscale reversion module, too."

"Where does that leave us?" Rain asked. "If the whole thing's locked down..."

"Not quite the whole thing. We can't change the programming modules, but the Workspace Icos it uses are a different story. They're not in the recursion loop, they must have been added in after the original programming was complete."

"Big deal, they don't do anything. They're just trivvy files. That's why they get through so many filters. Wait - are these Icos just trivvies? Or do they do something else?"

Yosemite shook his head. "No, they're just trivvies. But each Ico file is a self-contained character with its own choreography and logic." Yosemite waited a couple of seconds. "And we can replace them. With whatever we want." He looked meaningfully at Rain.

"Ok, we can produce our own show on some hijacked systems. IF the Nosers don't check the Ico files before they put these things out there. So what? The show will still start up too late to keep SecurNet from being compromised. I think we should take this whole thing to Colony Security, what the hell are we doing?"

"Easy, Rain, Hang on here. How many ColSec cops have you seen with danglies?"

"Not that many..."

"Enough of them, you know it and I know it."

"Maybe."

"And if ColSec does confiscate the units, nobody will ever know anything happened and something else will just come down in the next shipment."

Rain remembered his data stored in the equipment. "And I probably won't be around to see it. Yeah, ok. Shit."

"So here's what I'm thinking. First, we're going to splice in our own recursion loop to make sure our Icos are the ones that get used. We don't have to replace their actual files - ours will just kick in when the things start running. Now, are you able to get back in that container?"

"Unless uncle Sheb had the combo changed, yes."

"Ok. Now, you've heard of a guy named Languedoc?"

"You mean Lang? I've heard of him. Ew, isn't he the one that does those..."

Yosemite laughed. "That's not all he does, he's actually really good. He wrote a pack that can autoconvert a triv or even a still into a full-blown Ico when he was at the U. And he has a whole menagerie of his own characters. Clean-ish ones, I mean."

"I didn't know that. Doesn't he live in his parents' rover or something?"

"Ha! No, he doesn't. I know where to find him and I think he'll be more than glad to help out. I want you," he jabbed a finger in Rain's chest, "to get some sleep, because I am going to have something ready tonight!"

"You need sleep, I think," Rain replied, but Yosemite laughed "I have half a liter of jaundice, who needs sleep?"

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end part 3

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For anyone who's bother to read this far, here's the last installment.

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The woman's voice in the video was shaky, either from anger, fear, or both.

"...cute, but I hadn't, you know, asked for it or anything. I thought it was my kids' idea of a prank. I told it to go away, like you're supposed to be able to, but it wouldn't. And then another one that looked just like my daughter came up and said Hi mom! And before I could say anything the other one whipped around with a little samurai sword and, I'm not kidding - CHOPPED... OFF... TY'S... HEAD! I mean, I had never, never... then more of the humaform Icos res'd and they started... playing volleyball or something... with her... head."

The woman's voice stopped and Rain could hear the reporter mumbling something soothing. After a moment the woman's voice came back on. "Then it got really weird. Suddenly they stopped playing, then, I swear, they all ripped off their faces like masks and they were all Iconians underneath with their... their nasty little nose things waving around and they did some kind of dance together..." At that moment, in the video, a tiny head came whizzing off of the digimed toward the camera, spraying holographic blood in a wide spiral.

"Then there was a big scene that covered the unit, it was..." she started crying now. "It was a picture of our front door with a pair of kid's shoes in front of it and there was blood on them. I just dropped it and..." Then the video cut to a reporter at a desk apologising for upsetting content, that nobody in the woman's family had been harmed, and that it was part of a pattern of shocking displays being seen all around SciSphere and the University, and probably not an actual personal threat.

They showed even more than we expected, Rain thought as he watched the vid shift to another reporter. He didn't like the idea of using people's personal data to deliver shock attacks like that, but too many people were too comfortable with the culture shift, just content to ride it out and see what happened, not even willing to suspect that there might be more to it.

Rain keyed up the menu, pulled up gov news and scrolled through, then went to tech alerts. He had to drill down farther than he expected to find an interview with a TeGru explaining what had happened in SecurNet that morning.

==

"I won't even need to reopen the crate?" Rain asked dubiously.

Yosemite shook his head. "I juiced the fulmer with one of those microfusion pods."

"Those things are expensive! How the frak did you get it?"

Yosemite shrugged. "Pop's in powergen, he gets all this experimental crap. Anyway, just zap whatever the finetooth shows you. It's f&f. Just make sure you turn your scanner back on before you go into the container, it would look weird to them if you didn't."

"Right. Have you heard from uncle?"

"There won't be anyone near the container. Have you picked out what you're going to grab yet?"

It would also look weird to the Nosers if Rain went back into the container and did nothing detectable, they had reasoned, so he was going to steal something from another crate on the way out. "Yeah. It's on the top level, but it'll be a piece of cake."

"Good. Oh, one last thing. That timeout before resup? Yeah, we found it. It's not in the initial programming either - it's in a separate file with baby-level encryption."

"Really? How can you be sure?"

"I'm sure. I put it in our loop and reset it to one second in case there's a nulltest somewhere I can't see. Those Icos will start popping out as soon as people get in range. I can't wait, baby! Now get out of here. Wake me up when the semester's over, will you?"

==

According to TeGru Six, shown in the interview only in silhouette, an avalanche-style electronic assault on SecurNet had begun around 0735. It was all eventually traced to heavily infected personal electronics being carried by people entering and leaving SciSphere. There was no serious danger as all of the hijacked equipment was located far from sensitive areas, but the brutal assault slowed the whole network for a couple of hours. University systems had apparently suffered some damage and loss of function, but that was not his territory so he couldn't go into details.

Amazed at their success and wanting to see more, Rain went back to breaking news and started flipping through some of the other vids.

"...an Ico of Fluffy, of all things, and I said to him, Fluffy, bad boy, what are you doing on my scanner, and before he could even wag his tail, this other little Ico came up behind him..."

"...chronometer sped up and I could see the skin around my implants turning gray, then my face was all scaly, then even my bone structure started to change, and my ears and hair fell off, I was turning into an Iconian..."

"...this little hot Ico chick, and even though she had the danglies, little Ico me didn't care and was all like "Hey, whassup" and she was like "Your time, tha whassup" or something like that and I was like "What" and the biatch pulled out an autorifle and started blastin' holes in little Ico me and little Ico me was like "Wack!"..."

"...Spiders! Big spiders!..."

"...reports today that at about 0740 this morning, adstands throughout the University began showing a triv of the womens' gravball team writhing around nude in zero-G with a sultry voiceover repeating their slogan, "Do you like to have a ball?..." Rain chuckled. Obviously the temptation had been too great for Lang to resist.

"...even more unusual turn of events today when a ColSec team dispatched to the site of a suspected electronic infiltration device, according to eyewitnesses, started a brawl with a SciSec team that had arrived before them. No word yet on injuries or whether a device was recovered from that location..." The reporter's voice was slowly being drowned out by the sound of approaching engines.

Why is there a liftcar in the studio? Rain thought. Then he realized that the sound was not coming through the derm. He looked up, but his head was below the lip of the culvert entrance. It couldn't be more than half a click away now, and was definitely getting closer.

==

It had been an excruciating three days. Rain's second break-in had gone without a hitch, including the burglary. He was still on leave from the U, so he figured out how to locate and track freight containers over the net and spent most of his waking time browsing the neighborhood omnicams and watching the ticker he had set up for the container.

Early on the morning of the fourth day, the container was moved to outlading. Using the exitcam, Rain got the id of the lift that picked up the contents. It was a massive four-panel job that took on all of the freight at once. Naturally, it dropped off crates all over the colony. Rain spent hours tracking it over the net and found that only one of its destinations was in an omnicam blindspot - a rover sales spillover lot on the edge of the Bruise, the crescent of partly-terraformed waste that surrounded two thirds of the colony.

As agreed beforehand, Rain posted the various freight destinations to the Furies' HQ cell on SecurNet. Pretty soon each location was on continuous watch - including the lot, which was under direct observation by 'hikers' on a nearby ridge. They didn't have long to wait.

Just before midnight, thirty rovers from the lot trundled through the maintenance bay and then headed out toward the heart of the colony. This had to be it. Rain grabbed some energy bars, a jaundice, and the gear he needed. He made sure the electronics were all set to passive, told da he was meeting friends at the U, then grabbed his stolen Iconian goods and started the long walk to C3, the Colony Culture Center.

The Nosers were probably already looking for him - they must have found his data when they checked out that device. If he waited at home, he risked his family's lives. If he holed up in the U, he would be risking lives and maybe a riot. Maybe there needed to be a riot, but not just yet. If he turned himself in to ColSec, he was as good as disappeared already. If he turned himself in to one of the other security services, he would eventually wind up in the hands of ColSec.

Ideally, Rain would have liked to get all the way to the outwild before the shit hit the fan, but he had to go to C3 before he made his escape attempt. The walk seemed to take forever, but he didn't want his cred traced on the transport grid. Fortunately, the Friendship Garden was unoccupied. He knew there were probably Nosers somewhere keeping an omnicam vigil, so he would have to work fast.

==

Rain could tell from sound alone that the approaching vehicle was a security car. This wasn't going to be him against a handful of Spamburger's buddies. He pulled out his sticks and flash, his only weapons, and tossed them far back into the culvert. They would just get him in deeper trouble now, whoever had come for him.

Rain checked the time - 0833. His little triv from the C3 should be getting some play now.

==

The giant statue in the middle of the garden was the height of Noser art, the centerpiece of their idiotic philosophy. The statue included part of a ridiculous-looking spacecraft with a hatch open and a ramp extended. On the ramp was a huge metal representation of the Iconian Emperor Iso with his hands upraised, while smaller statues of humans ringed the bottom of the ramp and looked up at him in vapid adoration.

Every time the Furies had met, there had been talk of some way or another to deface or destroy this monstrosity. Tonight, Rain was finally going to do it. A quick look told him the garden was deserted. Even if someone came by, though, he didn't really care. He set down his pack at the foot of the ramp and pulled out what had to be the best gadget his father had ever brought home from work.

The MiniMizer was a prototype of what was supposed to be a kitchen gadget - a hand-held shrinker that could be used to miniaturize common household items, including food, for storage - and then restore them to full size when needed. It handled most things very well, but da's experiments with "small beer," for instance, were a complete disaster.

Rain had practiced over the last couple of days. He knew, for instance, that the thing needed a serious power source for large objects, so he had brought two of Yosemite's pods. He turned the little machine on, set it to 11, and started to work. For something of this size he needed an outline scan first, then he had to wait a full minute for it to calc the mass index. It was a metal statue on a plastumen ramp, so he didn't have to worry about protecting adjoining surface integrity or melting anything with the unit's own heat.

Rain set the machine beside the statue's feet and let it go to work. Fifteen minutes and a power cell later, the statue had been reduced to about ten centimeters high. Rain pulled out his tube of superbond and applied it to the area around the statue. While the enzymes worked themselves into a frenzy, Rain grabbed the MiniMizer with a pair of pliers and tossed into a pond on the other side of the statue. It wasn't a trivial piece of gear, so he'd left da a note telling him where it would be.

Back on the ramp, Rain pulled the stolen Ico goods out of his pack. They were a gaudy pair of Iconian shoes that had been redesigned for the human market. The Iconian style and the iridescent white highlights were unmistakable, and of everything in the crate Rain had opened, these seemed the most fitting. He seated them firmly in the bed of superbond, then spread even more of the stuff around the outside of the shoes to give them a little protection. They hid the miniaturized statue completetly. It was perfect.

The deed done, Rain backed off to record a short trivvy of the tableau. After he shut off the vid he took a moment to enjoy the sight. Then he picked up his gear, went to a pubterm to uplink the vid, then headed straight out of the colony.

==

The car had landed only a few meters away. Clearly, they knew exactly where he was. If they were hostile, trying to fight or run away down the culvert would be beyond pointless. Rain took a deep breath, then climbed up the slope. Whatever came next, he knew now that it had been worth it.

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Reply #6 Top
Wow...very nice indeed.
Reply #7 Top
That was a very good take on a subversion Marshal! Makes me really hate the Ico's! You ended it really well with not telling us what happened to rain too, it leaves us to make our own speculations on his outcome! Very nice, two thumbs up!
Reply #8 Top
Well played sir. Well played.
Reply #9 Top
wow marshall, very good.
Reply #10 Top
I love how Marshall's and my all time favorite AAR "Diary of a Terran Soldier" by themawcaw take seemingly simple little events that happen and change them into something massive and captivating, this is up there with my favorites Marshall, I love these story driven things that explain something that we so easily overlook, with so much depth!
Reply #11 Top
Agreed, if only themawcaw would have finished his other AAR.
Reply #12 Top
Agreed Neilo!
Reply #13 Top
There seem to be an awful lot of talented and original writers here on the GCII forums.

1st: Themocaw
2nd: Frogboy
3rd: Xpyre
4th: MarshallOneil
5th: thestormweaver

Well, at least thats how it is in my book.
Reply #14 Top
Another favorite of mine is BlackJackDavy's Green Pasture. In fact, reading that story was what gave me the impetus to finally finish this one and put it up. It's also a narrative type story, and I like the tone of the writing; it really feels like something recorded by an alien being.
Reply #15 Top
There seem to be an awful lot of talented and original writers here on the GCII forums.

1st: Themocaw
2nd: Frogboy
3rd: Xpyre
4th: MarshallOneil
5th: thestormweaver

Well, at least thats how it is in my book.


Updated list:

1st: Themocaw
2nd: Frogboy
3rd: Xpyre
4th: MarshallOneil
5th: BlackJackDavy
Reply #16 Top
There seem to be an awful lot of talented and original writers here on the GCII forums.

1st: Themocaw
2nd: Frogboy
3rd: Xpyre
4th: MarshallOneil
5th: thestormweaver

Well, at least thats how it is in my book.


Updated list:

1st: Themocaw
2nd: Frogboy
3rd: Xpyre
4th: MarshallOneil
5th: BlackJackDavy



Aww, I've been bumped off your list? I'll just have to work harder then
Reply #17 Top

There seem to be an awful lot of talented and original writers here on the GCII forums.

1st: Themocaw
2nd: Frogboy
3rd: Xpyre
4th: MarshallOneil
5th: thestormweaver

Well, at least thats how it is in my book.


Updated list:

1st: Themocaw
2nd: Frogboy
3rd: Xpyre
4th: MarshallOneil
5th: BlackJackDavy



Aww, I've been bumped off your list? I'll just have to work harder then


Actually, your AAR was also very good but Black Jack Davy's style of writing was purely original. Don't take it as if your AAR wasn't good.
Reply #18 Top

I've gotta say this story was a cracking good read. I thought a bit of thread necromancy was warranted.