POLL: Is it marketable?

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In the "writing" section of the forums, I have two recent "poems". Both were written as lyrics, the first being more contemporary and consistent in its rhythm, the second being a folk song basically. I would invite you to read them and give me an indication of whether you think they're marketable, or garbage. I can handle either assessment, so let me have it. I don't write poetry much because, while I am usually content with the end product, I don't see it as having mass appeal. So I'll have to trust your instincts.